列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use clear linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries. For example, if I need cosmetic products, I jot down the specific items I require. This helps me remember everything and avoid buying unnecessary things.

建议: Improve sentence structure and clarity by combining related ideas and using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and be more specific about how the list helps you at work.

示例: Yes, I make a list of essential items I need for work, such as my laptop, mobile phone, adapter, and chargers. I also include some basic cosmetics that I carry to the office. This list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建议: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons logically. Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons.

示例: It depends on the person, but many people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember a few items easily. For example, if they only need to buy two or three things, they feel it's unnecessary to write a list and prefer to keep the items in mind.

建议: Try to avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use clear and complete sentences with linking words to explain your preference. Be specific about why you prefer your phone over paper.

示例: Honestly, I prefer making lists on my phone because most phones have a notes app that is easy to use. For instance, when I go grocery shopping, I write down daily necessities on my phone, which is convenient and helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I definitely write some items name on the list when I go for groceries.

✓ Yes, I definitely write some item names on the list when I go for groceries.

The phrase 'items name' is incorrect because 'items' is plural and 'name' is singular. The correct plural form is 'item names' to match the plural noun 'items'.

× And if I'm going for like my cosmetic product, so just I jotted down the ideas like which I really need.

✓ And if I'm going for my cosmetic products, I just jot down the items that I really need.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'jotted' with present continuous 'I'm going'. Also, 'ideas' is not appropriate here; 'items' fits better. The verb 'jot' should be in present tense to match 'I'm going'.

× So definitely it it helped me to keep remember the things that I really need.

✓ So definitely it helps me to remember the things that I really need.

The phrase 'keep remember' is incorrect; the correct form is 'remember' or 'keep remembering'. Also, 'helped' is past tense, but the context suggests present tense 'helps'.

× Yes, I usually write the items which I really need for the daily necessities, like my laptop, my mobile, my adapter, my chargers.

✓ Yes, I usually write the items which I really need for daily necessities, like my laptop, my mobile, my adapter, and my chargers.

The list is missing a conjunction 'and' before the last item. Also, 'daily necessities' is plural and correct here.

× And some of the basic cosmetic I also carried to my.

✓ And some basic cosmetics I also carry to my office.

'Cosmetic' should be plural 'cosmetics' to match 'some'. Also, 'carried' is past tense; 'carry' fits better with the present context.

× To my office.

✓ I carry them to my office.

The phrase 'To my office.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and subject. It should be combined with the previous sentence or completed to form a full sentence.

× What is depend on?

✓ It depends on what?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. The correct form is 'It depends on what?' to form a proper question.

× Damn, like most of the people believe that if they don't make the list.

✓ Well, most people believe that if they don't make a list,

The sentence is incomplete and informal. 'Damn' is inappropriate here. Also, 'the people' should be 'people' without 'the' in this context.

× And they can remember some things very easily and most of the people they don't like to make list because they have to buy some few items like 2 to 3.

✓ they can remember some things very easily, and most people don't like to make a list because they only have to buy a few items, like two or three.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and articles. 'Some few items' is incorrect; 'a few items' is correct. Numbers should be written out in formal speech.

× So they thought that they don't need to write a list. So they can just have there in mind and.

✓ So they think that they don't need to write a list. They can just keep it in their mind.

'There' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'their' to indicate possession. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× Well, well, honestly, I like to make a list on my phone so everybody has the the app called notes in their phone.

✓ Well, honestly, I like to make a list on my phone because everybody has the app called Notes on their phone.

The phrase 'the the app' has a repeated article. Also, 'in their phone' should be 'on their phone' as apps are on devices.

× So I usually use it for many purposes like when I go for groceries.

✓ So I usually use it for many purposes, like when I go grocery shopping.

The phrase 'go for groceries' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go grocery shopping'.

× So I definitely write my like. I dums for a. For the daily necessities and.

✓ So I definitely write my list for the daily necessities.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I dums for a' is nonsensical. The corrected sentence is concise and clear.