列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Sua resposta precisa ser mais clara e organizada. Evite erros gramaticais e repetições, e use frases completas e coerentes. Por exemplo, explique que você cria listas no seu telefone, especialmente no WhatsApp, para lembrar o que precisa comprar, usando frases simples e conectores para melhorar a fluidez.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone, especially using WhatsApp. When I am at home or at work and remember something I need to buy, I write it down immediately to avoid forgetting.

建议: Sua resposta deve ser mais direta e organizada. Use frases completas e evite repetições. Explique claramente que você faz listas para melhorar áreas comuns no trabalho e que isso ajuda a organizar suas tarefas.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I often need to improve common areas. Writing down all the tasks helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建议: Sua resposta está boa, mas pode ser mais natural e fluida. Evite repetições e use conectores para ligar as ideias. Explique que algumas pessoas preferem memorizar porque estão ocupadas e acham mais prático.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they are very busy with work or their lifestyle. Therefore, they prefer to memorize what they need to do or buy during the week, as it feels more convenient for them.

建议: Sua resposta precisa ser mais clara e completa. Evite repetições e termine suas frases. Explique que prefere listas no telefone porque é mais fácil, ajuda no dia a dia e permite salvar para uso futuro.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier and helps me a lot during my busy day. Also, I can save the lists and use them again in the future when needed.

× I usually do a list are actually create a list.

✓ I usually make a list or actually create a list.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'a list'. The correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'are' is incorrectly used instead of 'or'. Suggestion: use 'make a list or actually create a list'.

× On WhatsApp, when I doing something in my house are in during my day at work and I always think about something that I have to buy and then I wrote down that.

✓ On WhatsApp, when I am doing something in my house or during my day at work, I always think about something that I have to buy and then I write that down.

The verb 'doing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'Are' is incorrectly used instead of 'or'. 'Wrote' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'write'. Also, 'wrote down that' should be 'write that down' for correct word order.

× So in my job I always trying to improve that parts.

✓ So in my job I am always trying to improve those parts.

The verb 'trying' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'That parts' is incorrect; 'parts' is plural and should be preceded by 'those'.

× And so then I write down and make a list about all the things that I have to improve.

✓ And so then I write down and make a list of all the things that I have to improve.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'of' when referring to the contents of a list.

× I think because they are always busy, busy at work or at their lifestyles, so they prefer just to memorize the things they have to buy or they have to do during their week.

✓ I think it's because they are always busy at work or with their lifestyles, so they prefer just to memorize the things they have to buy or do during their week.

The phrase 'at their lifestyles' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, 'they have to do' is better without repeating 'they' for conciseness.

× I do I really prefer to do a list on my phone because I think it's easier for me and it helps me help helps me a lot on my bees day.

✓ Yes, I really prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's easier for me and it helps me a lot on my busy days.

The verb 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. The phrase 'help helps me' is a repetition error. 'Bees day' is a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'busy days'.

× And also I think it is a good it's a good thing because I can save for later like I can I can use in the future when I.

✓ Also, I think it is a good thing because I can save it for later and use it in the future when I need to.

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition ('I can I can'). It needs to be completed properly with correct conjunctions and object references.