列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有些句子结构和用词不准确，且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的表达。

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop. Because of that, I often spend more time than necessary and end up buying things impulsively. I know it's not a good habit, but I haven't changed it yet.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，逻辑不够连贯。建议理清思路，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

示例: Yes, I do make a list for my work, and it helps me sometimes. Every morning, I prioritize the most important tasks so I can focus on completing them first. Then, I handle the simpler tasks afterwards.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且部分句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time and isn't always necessary. Also, unexpected events can make lists less useful, so they prefer to be more flexible.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写和语法，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can create or check my list anytime and anywhere since I carry my phone almost every day.

× I just grab anything I say in my eyes.

✓ I just grab anything I see with my eyes.

这里'say'是错误的动词形式，应该用动词的原形或现在时态'see'来表达看到的意思。'say'是说话的意思，不符合句意。

× but I just continued to do this.

✓ but I just continue to do this.

句子描述的是现在的习惯动作，应该用现在时态'continue'，而不是过去时态'continued'。

× I put the first things at first so I can focus all what would important work and get them down.

✓ I put the first things first so I can focus on all the important work and get them done.

'all what would important work'表达不正确，应该用'all the important work'，并且'get them down'应为'get them done'表示完成任务。

× After that I can deal with them simple tasks and I can I have I will have.

✓ After that I can deal with simple tasks that I have or will have.

句子结构混乱，'them simple tasks'应为'simple tasks'，并且表达未来和现在任务时应使用'that I have or will have'。

× Some people don't like making lists because it's. It takes to much time and they don't think it is necessary and sometimes things happens on expected expectedly.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and they don't think it is necessary, and sometimes things happen unexpectedly.

'to much'应为'too much'表示过多，'things happens'主谓不一致应为'things happen'，'on expected expectedly'应为'unexpectedly'，表示意外地。

× So it may be your slaves to make lists.

✓ So it may be a slave to making lists.

'your slaves'用法错误，应该表达“成为做清单的奴隶”，用'a slave to making lists'更合适。

× I prefer to make a list on on my phone because it is confident and I can make a list anytime anywhere I want.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can make a list anytime, anywhere I want.

'confident'用错，应该是'convenient'表示方便，'anytime anywhere'中间需要逗号分隔。

× If and it is also easy to check it because I hurt my cell phone almost average everyday.

✓ And it is also easy to check it because I use my cell phone almost every day.

'hurt'用错，应该是'use'表示使用，'almost average everyday'表达不正确，应为'almost every day'。

× And it's quite.

✓ And it's quiet.

'quite'和'quiet'发音相近但意思不同，句意应为“安静”，所以用'quiet'。