列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁明了的句子说明原因，避免语法错误和无关内容。

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find shopping relaxing and prefer to choose items spontaneously.

建议: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误，表达不清晰。建议先明确回答问题，再用简单句说明原因，注意时态和单词拼写。

示例: Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I often don't finish it. So, I feel that making lists is not very helpful for me, although it might be useful for others.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用简单句，清楚表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it is hard to keep them updated. Also, changing plans can make lists less useful and cause stress.

建议: 回答中有拼写和用词错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，清晰表达对比。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can access my list anytime and easily make changes. Paper lists are less flexible and not as convenient.

× No, I don't usually make a list. Why shop? Because I find shopping to be a relaxing activity, making a really still feel stressful and takes away the phone for me.

✓ No, I don't usually make a list. Why shop? Because I find shopping to be a relaxing activity, not really stressful and it takes away the phone for me.

句中使用了错误的代词“making a really still”，应为“not really”，表达否定含义。代词使用错误导致句意不清。建议注意代词的正确使用以表达准确意思。

× At first I sometimes make a released from my work, but I often don't finish it.

✓ At first I sometimes made a list for my work, but I often didn't finish it.

句中“make a released”不符合语法，且时态应为过去时，因句首有“at first”表示过去。应使用过去式“made”和“didn't finish”。建议注意时态与动词搭配的正确使用。

× Therefore I felted making Lister is not very helpful for me and even though it can be efficient for others.

✓ Therefore I felt making lists was not very helpful for me, even though it can be efficient for others.

“felted”是错误的过去式，应为“felt”。此外，“Lister”应为“lists”。时态应保持一致，使用过去时“was”。建议注意动词过去式和名词拼写。

× Some people don't like him make lists because it can be difficult to keep them updated.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because it can be difficult to keep them updated.

“him make lists”中“him”用法错误，应使用不定式“to make”。代词使用错误导致句子不通顺。建议注意代词和动词形式的搭配。

× Also changing place over makes list large useful and can cause stress.

✓ Also, changing places often makes lists less useful and can cause stress.

“changing place over”用法错误，应为“changing places often”；“list large useful”应为“lists less useful”。介词和词序错误影响句意表达。建议注意介词和词序的正确使用。

× I prefer to make list on my phone 'cause it's convenient.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient.

“make list”应为复数“make lists”，且“'cause”是口语缩写，正式表达应为“because”。代词和数量词使用错误。建议注意名词单复数和正式表达。

× I can exercise my list any mail and easily make changes.

✓ I can access my list anytime and easily make changes.

“exercise my list any mail”表达错误，应为“access my list anytime”。代词和词汇使用错误导致句意不明。建议注意词汇搭配和代词使用。

× On the other hand, paper lists alerts flexible and not as convenient.

✓ On the other hand, paper lists are less flexible and not as convenient.

“alerts flexible”用法错误，应为“are less flexible”。形容词和副词使用错误影响句子正确表达。建议注意形容词和副词的正确使用。