列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，导致意思难以理解。建议你用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用具体理由支持你的观点。

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find shopping to be a relaxing activity. Making a list feels stressful and takes away the fun for me.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体例子说明为什么列表对你有效或无效，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: At first, I sometimes make a list for my work, but I often don't finish it. Therefore, I feel that making lists is not very helpful for me, even though it can be efficient for others.

建议: 你的回答不完整且语法混乱，难以理解。建议用简单句子表达观点，说明为什么有些人不喜欢做清单，并给出具体原因。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it can be difficult to keep them updated. Also, changing plans often makes lists less useful and can cause stress.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can access my lists anywhere and easily make changes. On the other hand, paper lists are less flexible and not as convenient.

× No be 'cause I think sometimes I show is a relaxed way to escape from some pressure.

✓ No, because I think sometimes I show is a relaxed way to escape from some pressure.

句子中缺少逗号，导致表达不清晰。应在“No”和“because”之间加逗号，表示否定回答和原因的分隔。

× No be 'cause I think sometimes I show is a relaxed way to escape from some pressure.

✓ No, because I think sometimes I show that it is a relaxed way to escape from some pressure.

句子中缺少连接词“that”，导致结构不完整。应加上“that”引导宾语从句，使句子完整。

× So I don't like meta list.

✓ So I don't like making lists.

“meta list”不符合语境，应使用动名词短语“making lists”表示“列清单”的动作。

× It made me feel nevers and don't happy.

✓ It made me feel nervous and unhappy.

“nevers”和“don't happy”是错误的词形，应分别改为形容词“nervous”和“unhappy”来正确表达情绪。

× In the beginning I'm sometime I will make a list, but I find I'm always don't finish this list.

✓ In the beginning, sometimes I would make a list, but I find I always don't finish the list.

“sometime”应为副词“sometimes”，表示频率；“this list”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指。

× In the beginning I'm sometime I will make a list, but I find I'm always don't finish this list.

✓ In the beginning, sometimes I would make a list, but I find I always don't finish the list.

“I'm”用法错误，应去掉，改为“sometimes I would”表示过去习惯。

× So I think I don't need this.

✓ So I think I don't need it.

“this”指代不明确，改为“it”更符合指代前文提到的“list”。

× I think is more efficient, but I can insist in the do these things.

✓ I think it is more efficient, but I can't insist on doing these things.

缺少主语“it”；“can”应为“can't”表示否定；“insist in”应为“insist on”；“do these things”应改为动名词短语“doing these things”。

× Because I think it's very difficult and sometimes you if you have some another thing on your list will change in is not convenient sizing megaglest sometimes can give you some stress.

✓ Because I think it's very difficult, and sometimes if you have another thing on your list, it will change and is not convenient. Making a list sometimes can give you some stress.

句子结构混乱，缺少逗号分隔；“some another thing”应为“another thing”；“will change in is not convenient sizing megaglest”语义不清，改为“it will change and is not convenient”；“megaglest”应为“making a list”。

× Yes, in my.

✓ Yes, in my opinion.

“in my”不完整，应补充“opinion”表示“在我看来”。

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it's convenient, I can Skype, my list are everywhere and I can very easy to change.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient. I can sync, my lists are everywhere, and I can easily change them.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”；“Skype”应为“sync”（同步）；“list”应为复数“lists”；“can very easy”应为“can easily”；缺少代词“them”指代“lists”。

× But if he you paper I need a screen, I think it's not convenient, so I prefer to use my phone.

✓ But if I use paper, I need a screen. I think it's not convenient, so I prefer to use my phone.

“he you paper”语序错误，应为“if I use paper”；句子应分为两句表达更清晰。