列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me control my spending. For example, I write down the items I need so I don't buy unnecessary things. This way, I can keep track of my budget effectively.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và sửa một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp từ.

示例: Sometimes, I make a to-do list for my work in the evening to organize my tasks. Although I try to complete all of them, I usually finish only some because I prefer to go with the flow.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, hãy cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn để làm rõ quan điểm.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed by strict plans. They prefer to work flexibly and be more productive without restrictions. For instance, they might find lists too limiting for their creative process.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có cung cấp chi tiết, nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'smells' thay vì 'smells' có thể là lỗi đánh máy). Hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và liên kết các câu bằng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Since I major in computer science, I prefer making lists on my phone using apps like Notion. I rarely use paper, but if I do, I write on my paper calendar. Overall, digital notes are more convenient for me.

× Like where to make a list because I'm not an impulsive shopper at I can keep track of my money.

✓ Like where to make a list because I'm not an impulsive shopper and I can keep track of my money.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error due to the incorrect conjunction 'at' which disrupts the sentence flow. Replacing 'at' with 'and' correctly connects the two ideas, making the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× I'm really strict on my spending so I'm not exactly what I want to buy an.

✓ I'm really strict on my spending so I know exactly what I want to buy.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'I'm not exactly'. The correction adds the verb 'know' to complete the sentence and make the meaning clear.

× I don't just wander around and buy necessary stuff.

✓ I don't just wander around and buy unnecessary stuff.

The original sentence contradicts the intended meaning. Usually, people do not buy unnecessary stuff impulsively. Changing 'necessary' to 'unnecessary' corrects the meaning and improves sentence clarity.

× For example, in the evening I will make A to do list of all the things that I need to complete by night and I'll try to stick to it.

✓ For example, in the evening I will make a to-do list of all the things that I need to complete by night and I'll try to stick to it.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be grammatically correct and standard in English.

× You know, I'm kind of person that just let it be with the flow.

✓ You know, I'm the kind of person that just lets it be and goes with the flow.

The original sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'kind of person' and has incorrect verb forms. Adding 'the' and changing 'let' to 'lets' and adding 'goes' corrects subject-verb agreement and improves sentence structure.

× I think that people don't like making this because they feel that it's overwhelmed and.

✓ I think that people don't like making lists because they feel overwhelmed.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to refer to the subject. Also, 'it's overwhelmed' is incorrect; 'they feel overwhelmed' is the correct expression.

× That's just the type of person who goes with the flow and they want to work productively and not restricted to any kind of specific plan.

✓ Those are just the types of people who go with the flow and want to work productively without being restricted to any kind of specific plan.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement issues and awkward phrasing. Changing 'That's' to 'Those are', 'type of person' to 'types of people', and adjusting verb forms improves clarity and correctness.

× Well, as a person who major in computer science, which means that I use my computer a lot.

✓ Well, as a person who majors in computer science, which means that I use my computer a lot.

The verb 'major' requires third person singular form 'majors' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue corrected by changing 'major' to 'majors'.

× I rarely use smells to be honest.

✓ I rarely use smells, to be honest.

The phrase 'use smells' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. Possibly the intended word was 'smells' as a noun, but it doesn't fit here. If the student meant 'smells' as a metaphor or something else, clarification is needed. Otherwise, the sentence should be rephrased or the word corrected. Since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, adding a comma improves readability.