列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to speak more clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say "I make a list whenever I go shopping because I tend to forget what I need to buy." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 3-4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I often forget what I need to buy. Making a list helps me stay organised and ensures I don't miss anything important.

建议: Provide a clearer and more complete answer. Start with a direct response, then explain with linking words. For example, "Yes, I make a list to prioritise my tasks so I can finish the important ones faster."

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. This helps me prioritise tasks so that I can complete the most important ones faster and more efficiently.

建议: Improve sentence structure and use linking words for coherence. For example, "I believe everyone has their own way of working. Therefore, making lists works for some people but not for others, and that's perfectly fine."

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because everyone has their own way of organising tasks. While lists help some, others prefer different methods, which is completely acceptable.

建议: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, "I usually make lists on my phone because it is more convenient than paper. Since we always carry our phones, it's easier to access the list anytime."

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than paper. Since I always have my smartphone with me, I can easily check or update my list whenever needed.

× Oh yes, I'm make a list whenever I go for stopping because.

✓ Oh yes, I make a list whenever I go shopping because.

The phrase 'I'm make' is incorrect because 'make' should be in the present participle form 'making' if used with 'I'm'. However, the intended meaning is habitual action, so simple present 'I make' is appropriate. Also, 'go for stopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× I just forgot to what other things that I need to purchase when I go for stopping.

✓ I just forget what other things I need to purchase when I go shopping.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'forget' in simple present is better. Also, 'to what other things' is incorrect; it should be 'what other things'. 'Go for stopping' should be 'go shopping'.

× So yeah, it was mandatory for me to make a list of everything.

✓ So yeah, it is mandatory for me to make a list of everything.

The sentence uses past tense 'was' but the context implies a current habit, so present tense 'is' is appropriate.

× Mostly I prioritize my work so that I could complete the important ones. Faster, yeah.

✓ Mostly, I prioritize my work so that I can complete the important ones faster, yeah.

The adverb 'faster' should be placed at the end of the clause it modifies, not as a separate sentence. Also, 'could' is past tense modal; 'can' fits better for present ability.

× I believe that every people has their own way of doing or completing certain works.

✓ I believe that every person has their own way of doing or completing certain work.

'Every people' is incorrect; 'every' is used with singular nouns like 'person'. Also, 'works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun here.

× So making list work for some people and it doesn't work for some people, so is absolutely OK.

✓ So making lists works for some people and doesn't work for others, so it is absolutely OK.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'Work' should be 'works' to agree with singular subject. Also, 'so is absolutely OK' lacks subject; 'it is' is needed.

× If some people don't make list.

✓ If some people don't make lists.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to be grammatically correct and consistent.

× Uhm I usually make list on my phone.

✓ Uhm I usually make lists on my phone.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' and 'on my phone' is correct preposition usage here.

× I used north of my phone because it is more and more convenient than the paper because we don't carry paper.

✓ I use my phone because it is more and more convenient than paper since we don't carry paper.

'Used north of my phone' is incorrect; likely intended 'use my phone'. Also, 'the paper' should be 'paper' as uncountable noun. 'Because' repeated unnecessarily; 'since' is better for variety.

× Every time, Every day with a saw. There's always a smart phone in our him, so it would be more convenient for us to use their smartphone.

✓ Every time, every day, there is always a smartphone with us, so it is more convenient for us to use our smartphone.

Sentence fragments 'Every time, Every day with a saw.' are incorrect. 'There's always a smart phone in our him' is incorrect; should be 'there is always a smartphone with us'. 'Their smartphone' should be 'our smartphone' to match the speaker's perspective.