列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, correct word choice is important, for example, 'making lid list' should be 'making a list'.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and remember everything I need to buy.

建议: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words properly. For example, 'it I helped me to keep concentrate' should be 'it helps me to concentrate'.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me concentrate and manage my time effectively.

建议: Your answer is vague and contains filler words and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and avoid fillers like 'uh' and 'you know'.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and decide what to do at the moment.

建议: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammar and word choice errors. For example, 'very confident' should be 'very convenient'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and portable, and I always carry my phone with me, so I don't forget my list.

× I do like to give things very organized, so I do make a list when I shop because making lid list makes me, you know, when you go shopping, it helps me remember things were to purchase.

✓ I do like to keep things very organized, so I do make a list when I shop because making a list helps me, you know, when I go shopping, it helps me remember things to purchase.

The phrase 'give things very organized' is incorrect; the verb 'give' should be replaced with 'keep' to express maintaining organization. Also, 'making lid list' is a typo and should be 'making a list'. The phrase 'things were to purchase' is incorrect; it should be 'things to purchase' to correctly express purpose.

× I do like to give things very organized, so I do make a list when I shop because making lid list makes me, you know, when you go shopping, it helps me remember things were to purchase.

✓ I do like to keep things very organized, so I do make a list when I shop because making a list helps me, you know, when I go shopping, it helps me remember things to purchase.

The phrase 'making lid list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns in English.

× making lid list makes me, you know, when you go shopping, it helps me remember things were to purchase.

✓ making a list helps me, you know, when I go shopping, it helps me remember things to purchase.

The pronoun 'you' is used inconsistently; it should be 'I' to maintain the first-person perspective throughout the sentence.

× I'm very organized person, so I do have to make list when I'm working.

✓ I'm a very organized person, so I do have to make a list when I'm working.

The singular countable nouns 'person' and 'list' require the indefinite article 'a' before them.

× So it I helped me to keep concentrate, it helps me to be on time.

✓ So it helps me to keep concentrated, it helps me to be on time.

The phrase 'it I helped me' is incorrect; 'helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense. Also, 'keep concentrate' should be 'keep concentrated' to use the correct participle form after 'keep'.

× So I think having a schedule really.

✓ So I think having a schedule is really helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and complement. Adding 'is really helpful' completes the thought.

× Maybe they are. In all like to do the things on spot.

✓ Maybe they are. In all, they like to do things on the spot.

The phrase 'In all like to do the things on spot' is missing the subject 'they' and the article 'the' before 'spot'. Also, 'things' does not need 'the' here unless specifying particular things.

× Maybe they are. In all like to do the things on spot.

✓ Maybe they are. In all, they like to do things on the spot.

The preposition 'on' is correct before 'the spot', but the phrase was missing the article 'the'. Also, 'in all' should be followed by a comma.

× I love to make list on my phone.

✓ I love to make a list on my phone.

The singular countable noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I think it is very confident and you carry phone to everywhere you go, so you don't forget.

✓ I think it is very convenient and you carry your phone everywhere you go, so you don't forget.

The adjective 'confident' is incorrect here; it should be 'convenient'. Also, 'you carry phone to everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'you carry your phone everywhere'.

× I think it is very confident and you carry phone to everywhere you go, so you don't forget.

✓ I think it is very convenient and you carry your phone everywhere you go, so you don't forget.

The preposition 'to' before 'everywhere' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'everywhere' does not require a preposition here.

× So writing in paper, sometimes you forget to pack in the back.

✓ So writing on paper, sometimes you forget to pack it in the bag.

The phrase 'writing in paper' should be 'writing on paper' because we write on the surface of paper. Also, 'pack in the back' is unclear; likely intended 'pack it in the bag'.

× So writing in paper, sometimes you forget to pack in the back.

✓ So writing on paper, sometimes you forget to pack it in the bag.

The pronoun 'it' is needed to refer to the paper or list being packed. Also, 'in the back' is unclear and should be 'in the bag' or 'in the backpack'.

× So I think phone is very convenient, easy and portable and less.

✓ So I think the phone is very convenient, easy to use, portable, and less bulky.

The word 'less' is incomplete and unclear; it should be followed by a comparative adjective like 'bulky'. Also, 'phone' as a singular countable noun requires the definite article 'the' here.