列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“avoid forgotten important things”应改为“avoid forgetting important things”，“not by unnecessary products”应为“not buy unnecessary products”。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid forgetting important items. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I write down everything I need so that I can save time and avoid buying unnecessary products.

建议: 回答中出现了明显的语法错误和拼写错误，如“parrot ICE”不合适，且句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议加强语法基础，避免拼写错误，并且回答要紧扣问题，避免重复之前的内容。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important. For example, having a clear list allows me to focus on my priorities and complete my work more efficiently.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“avoid inmate list”应为“avoid making lists”，“feel stressed the ones they can finish all the test”表达混乱。建议多练习句子结构，使用简单明了的表达。

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed if they can't finish everything on the list. This can make them feel disappointed, so they prefer not to make lists at all. For example, if someone has a very busy day and can't complete all their tasks, they might avoid making a list.

建议: 回答中存在用词错误和表达不清，如“easy to access the anytime”应为“easy to access anytime”，“I used to eat everyday”应为“I usually check every day”，“make at least on paper”应为“make a list on paper”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子完整性。

示例: Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to access anytime. I usually check and update my tasks every day. However, sometimes I make a list on paper if I want to focus better or if my phone is not available.

× I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me clearly know what I need to buy and avoid forgotten important things.

✓ I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me clearly know what I need to buy and avoid forgetting important things.

这里“avoid forgotten important things”中的“forgotten”用法错误，应使用动名词形式“forgetting”来表示避免做某事。动词avoid后应接动名词。

× For example, when I go to the supermarket, I write down all the things I need to buy so that I can save time and not by unnecessary products.

✓ For example, when I go to the supermarket, I write down all the things I need to buy so that I can save time and not buy unnecessary products.

句中“not by unnecessary products”中的“by”应为动词“buy”，这里是动词原形，表示“不买不必要的产品”。

× Actually, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me parrot ICE the items I need and avoid forgotten, since this way I can shop more efficiently and save a lot of time.

✓ Actually, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I need and avoid forgetting, since this way I can shop more efficiently and save a lot of time.

句中“helps me parrot ICE the items”不通顺，应该用“helps me remember the items”表达记住物品。且“avoid forgotten”应为“avoid forgetting”，动词avoid后接动名词。

× For example, have a clear list provides me from wandering around the store.

✓ For example, having a clear list prevents me from wandering around the store.

句子结构错误，“have a clear list provides me from”不正确，应改为“having a clear list prevents me from”，动名词作主语，动词用prevent，后接介词from。

× I think some people don't like making list because they often feel stressed the ones they can finish all the test on the list.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they often feel stressed if they can't finish all the tasks on the list.

“making list”应为复数“making lists”，表示制作清单的行为；“feel stressed the ones they can finish”语法错误，应为“feel stressed if they can't finish”；“all the test”应为复数“all the tasks”。

× This can make their feel disappointed or upset, so they prefer to avoid inmate list altogether.

✓ This can make them feel disappointed or upset, so they prefer to avoid making lists altogether.

“make their feel”中“their”应为宾格“them”；“avoid inmate list”应为“avoid making lists”，动词avoid后接动名词。

× For example, if someone have a very busy day and can't complete or everything.

✓ For example, if someone has a very busy day and can't complete everything.

“someone have”主谓不一致，应为“someone has”；“can't complete or everything”不完整，应为“can't complete everything”。

× Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to access the anytime.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to access anytime.

“easy to access the anytime”中“the”多余，应去掉。

× I used to eat everyday to check and update my tasks quickly.

✓ I used to check and update my tasks every day quickly.

“used to eat everyday”不符合语境，应为“used to check and update my tasks every day quickly”，且“everyday”应分开为“every day”。

× However, sometimes I make at least on paper if I want to focus better or if my phone is not available.

✓ However, sometimes I make at least one list on paper if I want to focus better or if my phone is not available.

“make at least on paper”缺少名词，应为“make at least one list on paper”。