列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够流畅。建议减少重复表达，使用更自然的连接词，并且注意语法，如"help me remember anything"而不是"an anything"。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before going to the supermarket because it helps me save time and money. For example, last week I didn't forget anything thanks to my list.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and manage my time better. For example, writing down my duties prevents me from forgetting important things.

建议: 回答不连贯且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，清晰表达原因，并使用连接词使回答更自然。

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and tiring. For example, they prefer to remember things in their head, which feels more relaxing to them.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然。建议合并句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅。

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's more convenient. Also, I often get distracted by other apps when using my phone.

× because it helps me save time and save money and help me remember an anything.

✓ because it helps me save time, save money, and helps me remember anything.

这里的动词需要保持一致的形式，三个动词都应该用第三人称单数形式helps，且anything前不需要冠词an。

× For example, one last week I went shopping, I didn't forget anything, so.

✓ For example, last week I went shopping and I didn't forget anything.

句子中one用法错误，应去掉；连接词so用法不当，应改为and连接两个完整句子。

× because it help me organize my desk and manage my time better.

✓ because it helps me organize my desk and manage my time better.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加s变为helps。

× For example when I was writing down what I needed to do. Aye. Can avoid forgetting important thing.

✓ For example, when I was writing down what I needed to do, I could avoid forgetting important things.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整；important thing应为复数important things。

× Can avoid forgetting important thing.

✓ I can avoid forgetting important things.

缺少主语I，important thing应为复数important things。

× Making lists. I think not everyone like making a list because some people find it boring and. Tired, for example.

✓ Making lists, I think not everyone likes making a list because some people find it boring and tiring, for example.

like应为第三人称单数likes；tired用作形容词不合适，改为动名词tiring表示令人感到厌烦。

× They may prefer to remember the in their head rather than write them down.

✓ They may prefer to remember them in their head rather than write them down.

the用法错误，应为代词them指代前文内容。

× This way to feel more relaxing and the last?

✓ This way makes them feel more relaxed, right?

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语动词；relaxing是现在分词，表示令人放松，改为形容词relaxed表示感到放松。

× Because I think it feel convenient and I think I'm a very like play mobile phone person.

✓ Because I think it feels convenient and I think I really like playing on my mobile phone.

feel应加s变为feels；very like用法错误，应改为really like；play应改为playing表示动名词。

× So if I make a list. On my mobile phone I will be disturbed by other application.

✓ So if I make a list on my mobile phone, I will be disturbed by other applications.

句子断开不完整，应合并为一句；application应为复数applications。