列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. Moreover, it saves me time and effort during shopping.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích chi tiết hơn với các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize all the essential tasks I need to complete. As a result, I can finish my assignments on time and feel more productive.

建议: Câu trả lời cần được tổ chức rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and enjoy more freedom in their workspace. Additionally, some may lack discipline, which makes it harder for them to stick to a list.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do bằng các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Using my phone is more convenient than paper lists, which I often forget to bring along.

× Yes, actually I have a set. List when before I go shop.

✓ Yes, actually I have a set list that I make before I go shopping.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'List when before I go shop' is not a complete or grammatically correct phrase. The correction combines the ideas into a complete sentence with proper word order and verb forms.

× Just because it helps me to better organized an ensure that I don't miss any important things to buy an additionally it will save me times a labor.

✓ Just because it helps me to be better organized and ensures that I don't miss any important things to buy, and additionally, it saves me time and labor.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms ('organized' should be 'be organized', 'ensure' should be 'ensures'), missing articles, and awkward phrasing ('save me times a labor'). The correction fixes verb forms, adds necessary articles, and improves clarity.

× Honestly, I always make a list when I work because it helps me to list all these essential tasks that have to complete an.

✓ Honestly, I always make a list when I work because it helps me to list all these essential tasks that have to be completed.

The phrase 'have to complete an' is incorrect; it should be 'have to be completed' to use the passive form correctly. The preposition and verb form were incorrect.

× As a result, I always get full. I always fulfill through assignment after.

✓ As a result, I always complete all my assignments afterwards.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'I always get full' and 'I always fulfill through assignment after' do not convey the intended meaning. The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× Just because they want to work in study spontaneously an in another reasons is that people is not. Well disciplined. Anne.

✓ Just because they want to work and study spontaneously, and another reason is that people are not well disciplined.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions ('in study' should be 'and study'), incorrect verb agreement ('people is' should be 'people are'), and fragmented structure. The correction fixes these issues.

× Moreover, they want to be more free in their workspace. Actually.

✓ Moreover, they want to be freer in their workspace.

The word 'Actually' is used as a sentence fragment and is unnecessary here. 'More free' is better expressed as 'freer'. The correction combines the ideas into a proper sentence.

× Because I'm a person who always have my phone on the on my hand.

✓ Because I'm a person who always has my phone in my hand.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'a person' (third person singular). Also, 'on the on my hand' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'in my hand'.

× So making list on my phone is. Better than on their people list.

✓ So making a list on my phone is better than making a list on paper.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'On their people list' is incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the comparison and corrects the sentence structure.

× Actually a paper usually. Is usually forgotten by May, so I.

✓ Actually, paper lists are usually forgotten by me, so I prefer using my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains a typo ('May' instead of 'me'). The correction provides a complete, clear sentence with proper structure.