列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，建议使用完整句子并避免口语缩写，增加连贯性和清晰度。

示例: No, I seldom make a list when I shop because I usually buy what I want at that moment and don't like to plan ahead.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用正确时态和句型，明确回答问题并提供具体细节。

示例: I sometimes make a list for my work, especially when I am busy. However, sometimes I rely on my memory instead of making a list.

建议: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体原因支持。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it can be stressful to complete all the tasks they write down.

建议: 回答较为自然，但有口语化表达和语法小错误，建议使用更正式的表达并注意句子结构。

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I am used to writing things down, and it is easier to see and check tasks once they are completed.

× No, I seldom make list 'cause I usually buy what I want just at that time I don't want to plan it.

✓ No, I seldom make lists 'cause I usually buy what I want just at that time. I don't want to plan it.

这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”，因为表示泛指购物清单，英语中通常用复数形式表示多次或多种清单。

× I sometimes applying for my work but it's usually occurs on my busy times.

✓ I sometimes apply for my work but it usually occurs during my busy times.

动词“apply”应使用原形“apply”而非现在分词“applying”，因为这里是一般现在时的陈述句。

× But one M3 I don't make a list.

✓ But once I don't make a list.

原句中“one M3”不符合语法，应为“once”表示“一次”。

× Because making list is not an easy thing, issued plying needs or height and you should push yourself to finish other things in your list is stressful.

✓ Because making lists is not an easy thing, issuing, planning needs or height, and you should push yourself to finish other things in your list is stressful.

“making list”应为复数“making lists”，表示泛指多次制作清单的行为。

× Because making list is not an easy thing, issued plying needs or height and you should push yourself to finish other things in your list is stressful.

✓ Because making lists is not an easy thing; issuing, planning needs or height, and pushing yourself to finish other things in your list is stressful.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和标点，导致句意不清。应调整句子结构，使其更通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on paper 'cause, you know, I'm a student, so I used to write things on the paper and I can see it clearly.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper 'cause, you know, I'm a student, so I am used to writing things on paper and I can see them clearly.

“make a list”应改为复数“make lists”，表示习惯性行为；“used to write”应改为“am used to writing”，表示习惯；“things”对应复数代词“them”。

× After I finish in one task I can check it.

✓ After I finish one task, I can check it off.

“finish in one task”中“in”多余，应去掉；“check it”应为“check it off”，表示完成任务后勾选。