列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how you make your list and why.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need. Usually, I write the list on my phone notes, so I can easily check it while shopping.

建议: Your answer has good content but is incomplete and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your sentences. Also, avoid filler words and be more concise.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work every morning. I write down all the tasks I need to complete, and at the end of the day, I check to make sure everything is done. This method helps me stay consistent and organized.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and linking words to explain your opinion. Avoid hesitation sounds and incomplete sentences.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or restrictive. However, I used to feel the same, but as I matured, I realized that lists help organize tasks and improve memory.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has many pauses and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and clearly, using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid unnecessary fillers and complete your thoughts.

示例: Personally, I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it all day. This way, I don't need to open a diary or notebook, and I can easily check my list whenever I need to.

× I always make a list to whenever I go for shopping like usually I.

✓ I always make a list whenever I go shopping, usually.

The phrase 'to whenever I go for shopping' is incorrect because 'to' should not be used before 'whenever' and 'go for shopping' should be 'go shopping' as 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form without 'for'. The corrected sentence removes 'to' and 'for' to properly use the verb + -ing form.

× I tried to make a list on my notes so whenever I go to shop so I just.

✓ I try to make a list on my notes so whenever I go shopping, I just check it.

The original sentence is incomplete and has redundant conjunctions 'so' and lacks a main verb at the end. Changing 'tried' to 'try' fits the habitual action, and completing the sentence with 'I just check it' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Is it work?

✓ Does it work?

The question 'Is it work?' is incorrect because 'work' is a verb and requires the auxiliary 'does' in present simple questions. 'Is' is used with adjectives or nouns, not verbs. The correct modal auxiliary for present simple is 'does' for third person singular.

× I do make a list of for my work.

✓ I do make a list for my work.

The phrase 'list of for my work' incorrectly uses two prepositions 'of' and 'for' together. The correct preposition here is 'for' to indicate purpose. Removing 'of' corrects the prepositional usage.

× Like when I wake up in morning every day I would just go to my notes and make the list for whatever I have to do that day and at the end of the day I.

✓ Like when I wake up in the morning every day, I just go to my notes and make a list of whatever I have to do that day, and at the end of the day, I check it.

The phrase 'in morning' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'make the list' should be 'make a list' as it is not a specific list previously mentioned. The sentence was incomplete, so adding 'check it' completes the thought. Proper articles and sentence completion improve clarity.

× I used to be a person who don't like her.

✓ I used to be a person who didn't like it.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists', which is an action or concept and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'don't' should be 'didn't' to match past tense 'used to'. Correct pronoun and verb tense usage is necessary.

× Who didn't like to make list but when as I grow up and.

✓ Who didn't like to make lists, but as I grew up and.

The verb 'grow' should be in past tense 'grew' to match the past context. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' (plural) for natural usage. Correct past tense and plural form improve grammatical accuracy.

× Making the list on your phone is better because you carry your phone all the day and you don't have to opening a dairy or your book.

✓ Making the list on your phone is better because you carry your phone all day and you don't have to open a diary or your book.

The phrase 'all the day' should be 'all day' without 'the'. Also, 'have to opening' is incorrect; after 'have to' the base form of the verb 'open' should be used. 'Dairy' is a misspelling of 'diary'. Correct prepositions and verb forms are necessary.