列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn để trả lời hiệu quả hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể kết hợp các câu lại và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping, either on my phone app or on paper. For instance, when I go to the market or shopping mall, I check my list on my iPhone to make sure I don't forget anything.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make lists for my work, especially when I study at school or at home. For example, when I do assignments, I organize my tasks and sometimes discuss them with my classmates to ensure everything is done properly.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to do things spontaneously. However, making lists helps people stay organized and ensures that tasks are completed on time.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Honestly, I prefer making lists on my phone using apps like Notes because it's more convenient and helps me stay organized compared to writing on paper.

× I usually take note before shopping or buying something.

✓ I usually take notes before shopping or buying something.

The phrase 'take note' is usually used in singular form when referring to noticing something, but here it means making a list or recording items, so the plural 'take notes' is more appropriate.

× I also take note on the app.

✓ I also take notes on the app.

The correct preposition to use with 'take notes' is 'on' when referring to a platform like an app. Also, 'take notes' is the correct phrase rather than 'take note' in this context.

× On my iPhone.

✓ I do this on my iPhone.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and subject. It should be combined with the previous sentence or completed to form a full sentence.

× I usually list when I work especially when I study at a school or even at home for instance.

✓ I usually make a list when I work, especially when I study at school or even at home, for instance.

The verb 'list' is not commonly used alone as a verb meaning 'to make a list'; 'make a list' is the correct phrase. Also, 'at a school' should be 'at school' when referring to the general place of study.

× For instance like when I do assignment with my with my own on my group will check with my classmates I also. Michael is.

✓ For instance, when I do assignments on my own or with my group, I also check with my classmates.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to clarify the meaning and correct grammar.

× I think some people enjoy. Uh, making list because they want to do everything more organized an.

✓ I think some people enjoy making lists because they want to do everything more organized.

The phrase 'more organized' is an adjective, but it should be used with 'in a more organized way' or 'more organized manner' to be grammatically correct. However, in casual speech, 'more organized' is acceptable. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists'.

× Make lists, help them to make sure that everything we done a yeah.

✓ Making lists helps them to make sure that everything is done, yeah.

'Make lists' should be 'Making lists' as the subject of the sentence. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject. 'We done' should be 'is done' to correctly use the passive voice.

× I mean, honestly, I enjoy. And preferred to writing.

✓ I mean, honestly, I enjoy and prefer writing.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'prefer'. Also, 'to writing' is incorrect; it should be 'writing' as the object of 'prefer'.

× The list on my phone or a net or an AT note on my phone.

✓ The list on my phone or a note app on my phone.

'A net' and 'an AT note' are unclear and likely incorrect. It should be 'a note app' or similar. Prepositions are correct here.

× It just like I can making this become stay organizing.

✓ It's just like I can keep this organized.

'I can making' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed by base verb 'make' or 'keep'. 'Become stay organizing' is incorrect; 'keep this organized' is the correct phrase.