列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find shopping relaxing. I prefer to remember what I want to buy and sometimes I browse several times to see if there are new items that catch my interest.

建议: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不准确，建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，清晰表达使用列表和提醒工具的情况。

示例: Yes, as a college student, I make lists for my studies because I have important deadlines. I also use an app to remind me, and it helps me stay organized.

建议: 回答表达了个人感受，但句子结构重复且有语法错误，建议使用更丰富的词汇和多样的句型来表达观点。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them stressful. Constant reminders of tasks can be overwhelming and may even cause procrastination.

建议: 回答较为完整，但存在重复词汇和小语法错误，建议注意句子连贯性和词汇准确性。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, making it more convenient than paper. Also, the alarm feature helps me remember deadlines effectively.

× I think shopping is a very relaxing event and not do not need that last one.

✓ I think shopping is a very relaxing event and does not need that last one.

这里主语是单数'shopping'，谓语动词需要用第三人称单数形式'does'，而不是'do'。

× I would keep it in mine and the selected their favorite 1 and I will also go over several times to check if there are new items that I want to buy.

✓ I would keep it in mind and select my favorite ones, and I will also go over it several times to check if there are new items that I want to buy.

'mine'应为'mind'，表示记住；'the selected their favorite 1'结构混乱，应改为'select my favorite ones'；代词使用不当，需改为正确的所有格和复数形式。

× Currently I am a student in college and I do make a left for my study because sometimes they are important deadlines that I can't miss.

✓ Currently I am a student in college and I do make a list for my study because sometimes there are important deadlines that I can't miss.

'left'应为'list'，单词拼写错误；'they are important deadlines'中'they'指代不明，应改为'there are'表示存在。

× Deanna use Alisa to remind myself and it works a lot for me.

✓ I use Alisa to remind myself and it works a lot for me.

'Deanna'应为'I'，主语错误；'myself'用法正确，表示反身代词。

× I don't like making less myself at first because I think a list is very stressful for me.

✓ I don't like making lists myself at first because I think a list is very stressful for me.

'less'应为'lists'，复数形式，表示多个清单。

× It keeps reminding me of the important things that I have to do and it really annoys me and makes me want to delay it again and again.

✓ It keeps reminding me of the important things that I have to do, and it really annoys me and makes me want to delay them again and again.

'it'指代不明确，'delay it'应改为'delay them'，因为指的是多项任务。

× Personally I prefer making a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me every day and it is more convenient and easy to access my phone then a paper sometimes.

✓ Personally I prefer making a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me every day and it is more convenient and easier to access my phone than paper sometimes.

'then'应为'than'，表示比较；'easy'应为'easier'，形容词比较级。

× What's more, the the alarm on my phone can remind me the deadline.

✓ What's more, the alarm on my phone can remind me of the deadline.

动词'remind'后应接介词'of'，表示提醒某事。