列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Actually no. But if I go to the mall and I see anything what I want, I buy it.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Actually yes, and I usually make a list for my work and I choose a day for a main skills and another day for free time.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Actually I don't know, but maybe too much light for a make a list for work.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone, not a paper bill 'cause maybe I forget the somewhere where I put paper.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 60.0建议: حاول تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيمًا وطبيعية، وابتعد عن الأخطاء اللغوية مثل "anything what I want". استخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة مع تفاصيل داعمة.
示例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I buy things spontaneously when I find something I like at the mall.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 65.0建议: حاول توضح إجابتك أكثر وتستخدم كلمات ربط لتسلسل الأفكار، وابتعد عن التكرار مثل "actually yes". وضح كيف تساعدك القائمة في تنظيم وقتك.
示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. For example, I dedicate certain days to focus on main skills and other days for free time, which helps me stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 40.0建议: إجابتك غير واضحة وتحتوي على أخطاء لغوية. حاول تعبر عن رأيك بشكل واضح ومفهوم مع استخدام مفردات مناسبة.
示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 55.0建议: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام كلمات مناسبة مثل "because" بدلاً من "'cause"، وكن أكثر دقة في التعبير عن السبب.
示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I might forget where I put a paper list.
语法
× Actually no. But if I go to the mall and I see anything what I want, I buy it.
✓ Actually no. But if I go to the mall and I see anything that I want, I buy it.
The phrase 'anything what I want' is incorrect. The correct relative pronoun here is 'that' instead of 'what'. 'What' is not used after 'anything' in this context.
× Actually yes, and I usually make a list for my work and I choose a day for a main skills and another day for free time.
✓ Actually yes, and I usually make a list for my work and I choose a day for main skills and another day for free time.
The article 'a' before 'main skills' is incorrect because 'skills' is plural and 'main' is an adjective. We should say 'for main skills' without 'a'.
× Actually I don't know, but maybe too much light for a make a list for work.
✓ Actually I don't know, but maybe it's too much effort to make a list for work.
The phrase 'too much light for a make a list' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression should be 'too much effort to make a list'. Also, 'a make' is incorrect; 'make' is a verb and should not have 'a' before it.
× Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone, not a paper bill 'cause maybe I forget the somewhere where I put paper.
✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone, not on paper because maybe I forget where I put the paper.
The phrase 'not a paper bill' is incorrect; it should be 'not on paper'. Also, 'forget the somewhere' is incorrect; it should be 'forget where'. The definite article 'the' is unnecessary here.
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