列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta jelas. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'an ICANN' dan 'I can avoiding'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan efektif.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and saves time. This way, I can avoid buying things that I don't need.

建议: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan tata bahasa, serta buat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Hindari kata yang tidak tepat seperti 'surfing the time' dan 'to an'.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work. It works well because it helps me manage my time, stay organized, and prioritize tasks effectively.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap serta jelas. Gunakan kosakata yang tepat seperti 'spontaneous' dan 'feel free'.

示例: I'm not sure, but some people might not like making lists because they prefer to be more spontaneous and feel free to decide what to do.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta buat kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'all this' dan 'bring the pepper'.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to handle and simpler. Also, I can easily carry the paper with me.

× I can avoiding. Something that I not. Need.

✓ I can avoid something that I do not need.

The verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'avoiding' is incorrect after 'can'; it should be 'avoid'. Also, 'I not need' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not need'. Penggunaan 'can' harus diikuti oleh bentuk dasar kata kerja, bukan bentuk '-ing'. Jadi, 'avoiding' salah setelah 'can'; harusnya 'avoid'. Selain itu, 'I not need' salah; harusnya 'I do not need'.

× I make a list for work to an.

✓ I make a list for work too.

The word 'an' is incorrectly used here; the correct word is 'too' to indicate 'also'. Kata 'an' digunakan secara salah; kata yang benar adalah 'too' untuk menunjukkan 'juga'.

× I can surfing the time.

✓ I can save time.

The phrase 'can surfing' is incorrect; after 'can' the base verb should be used. Also, 'surfing the time' is not a correct expression; the intended meaning is likely 'save time'. Frasa 'can surfing' salah; setelah 'can' harus menggunakan kata kerja dasar. Selain itu, 'surfing the time' bukan ungkapan yang benar; maksudnya kemungkinan 'save time'.

× I can. Well organized an I can prioritize tasks. Fur.

✓ I can be well organized and I can prioritize tasks further.

The sentence is fragmented and missing verbs. 'Well organized' needs a verb like 'be' to form correct structure. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Fur' is likely 'further'. Kalimat terpotong dan kurang kata kerja. 'Well organized' perlu kata kerja seperti 'be' agar struktur benar. 'An' harusnya 'and'. 'Fur' kemungkinan 'further'.

× some people. Need two more spontaneous an fail freely.

✓ Some people need to be more spontaneous and feel free.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and words: 'two' should be 'to', 'fail' should be 'feel'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. Kalimat menggunakan kata ganti dan kata yang salah: 'two' harusnya 'to', 'fail' harusnya 'feel'. Juga, 'an' harusnya 'and'.

× I prefer to make all this on paper because it's more easy to handle an.

✓ I prefer to make all this on paper because it's easier to handle.

The comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier', not 'more easy'. Bentuk komparatif dari 'easy' adalah 'easier', bukan 'more easy'.

× Is more simple I think.

✓ It is simpler, I think.

The sentence lacks a subject 'It' and uses 'more simple' instead of the correct comparative 'simpler'. Kalimat kurang subjek 'It' dan menggunakan 'more simple' bukan komparatif yang benar 'simpler'.

× An I can bring the pepper. Easy. On my hand.

✓ And I can bring the paper easily in my hand.

'An' should be 'and'. 'Pepper' is a mishearing of 'paper'. 'Easy' should be 'easily' (adverb). 'On my hand' is better expressed as 'in my hand'. 'An' harusnya 'and'. 'Pepper' adalah salah dengar dari 'paper'. 'Easy' harusnya 'easily' (kata keterangan). 'On my hand' lebih baik 'in my hand'.