列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'during the time of shopping' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammatical errors such as 'going to shopping' should be 'going shopping'.

示例: Yes, I always make a list before going shopping because it helps me save time and makes the process more convenient.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. The phrase 'Work up on my studies' is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why the list is reliable. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

示例: I usually don't make lists for household chores, but I always make one for my studies because it helps me stay organized and focused.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundant phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and provide specific examples if possible.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious and feel it's not suitable for them, which makes them less motivated to follow through.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences for better flow and using linking words. Also, avoid starting sentences with 'And'.

示例: It depends on the situation; sometimes I make a list on paper if it's handy, but other times I use my phone because it's always available.

× Yes, making a list before going to shopping is very important part in my life.

✓ Yes, making a list before going shopping is a very important part of my life.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'important part in my life' should be 'important part of my life' because 'part of' is the correct prepositional phrase here.

× Yes, making a list before going to shopping is very important part in my life.

✓ Yes, making a list before going shopping is a very important part of my life.

The phrase 'very important part' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'very important part' to be grammatically correct.

× I like making list so as to save my time during the time of shopping and it is very convenient for me.

✓ I like making a list so as to save my time during shopping and it is very convenient for me.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'during the time of shopping' is wordy; 'during shopping' is more natural.

× I like making list so as to save my time during the time of shopping and it is very convenient for me.

✓ I like making a list so as to save my time during shopping and it is very convenient for me.

The phrase 'during the time of shopping' is unnecessarily long; 'during shopping' is the correct and concise prepositional phrase.

× I usually don't make a list for my household chores, but I definitely make a list for my studies because following that list I find it very reliable too.

✓ I usually don't make a list for my household chores, but I definitely make a list for my studies because I find it very reliable to follow that list too.

The phrase 'following that list I find it very reliable too' is awkward. It is better to say 'I find it very reliable to follow that list' for clarity and correctness.

× Work up on my studies.

✓ I work on my studies.

The phrase 'Work up on my studies' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct expression is 'I work on my studies' to indicate effort towards studying.

× According to my point of view, some people don't like making a list because they find this work tedious and they think that it's not their cup of tea.

✓ In my point of view, some people don't like making a list because they find this work tedious and think that it's not their cup of tea.

The phrase 'According to my point of view' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In my point of view' or better 'From my point of view'. Also, 'they think that it's' can be simplified to 'think that it's'.

× Making a list and following that and also it realize it makes it makes them realize.

✓ Making a list and following it helps them realize its importance.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. A clear and grammatically correct sentence is 'Making a list and following it helps them realize its importance.'

× It depends on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Sometimes I make a list on the paper if it's handy.

✓ Sometimes I make a list on paper if it's handy.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper' without the article 'the'.

× And sometimes I make a list on my phone because it's always there and available.

✓ Sometimes I make a list on my phone because it's always there and available.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here; removing it improves sentence structure.