列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pengucapan, serta gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan jelas. Hindari pengulangan kata dan pastikan kalimat mengalir dengan baik.

示例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I buy only what I need, which prevents me from spending too much money.

建议: Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hubungkan ide dengan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dipahami.

示例: Yes, I make a detailed schedule for my work, listing tasks point by point. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss any important duties.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap serta jelas. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran jawaban.

示例: I'm not sure, but maybe some people prefer to be more spontaneous and enjoy the freedom of making decisions without a fixed plan.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to see and handle, and I find it more convenient than using my phone.

× Yes I do. I sometimes make a list when I shop because it's make me more organized an.

✓ Yes I do. I sometimes make a list when I shop because it makes me more organized.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'an' is incomplete and should be removed or corrected.

× I know what I must to buy.

✓ I know what I must buy.

The modal verb 'must' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. 'Must to buy' is incorrect.

× Ann, I know need to. Spend too much money.

✓ And, I know I need to avoid spending too much money.

The sentence is fragmented and missing the subject 'I' before 'need'. Also, 'Ann' is likely a typo for 'And'. The verb phrase needs to be completed properly.

× I make a. Schedule. Point by point. It. Make me more organized an I don't miss anything.

✓ I make a schedule, point by point. It makes me more organized and I don't miss anything.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'an' is incomplete and should be 'and'.

× My job or my?

✓ My job or my tasks?

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'tasks' clarifies the meaning.

× maybe they just want to more spontaneous.

✓ maybe they just want to be more spontaneous.

The verb 'want' should be followed by 'to be' before an adjective.

× An 1-2 more freely.

✓ And to be more free.

The phrase '1-2' is unclear and likely a typo. 'More freely' is an adverb; 'more free' as an adjective fits better here.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more easy to see an.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easier to see and

The comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier'. Also, 'an' is incomplete and should be 'and'.

× Easy to handle.

✓ easy to handle.

This fragment should be connected to the previous sentence for clarity.