列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me plan my purchases carefully. For example, by listing items beforehand, I can control my budget and avoid buying unnecessary things. This way, I also save time while shopping.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối, đồng thời cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và chi tiết hơn.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks effectively. For instance, I write down all my tasks on paper and prioritize them, which allows me to complete my work smoothly and on time.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ quan điểm.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and frustrating. For example, they may prefer to remember their tasks mentally instead of writing them down, which they believe helps them stay flexible throughout the day.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề, liên kết ý bằng từ nối và cung cấp lý do cụ thể, ví dụ minh họa cho sự lựa chọn của mình.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my tasks anytime and avoid forgetting anything important.

× Yes I do make a list when I shopping.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I am shopping.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct structure is 'I am shopping' to indicate an action in progress.

× In my opinion when I make a list I will have time to think about what I will buy at this at the shop or the supermarket so I can control my budget an also I can manage my time to not ordering too much into.

✓ In my opinion, when I make a list, I will have time to think about what I will buy at the shop or the supermarket, so I can control my budget and also manage my time to avoid ordering too much.

The phrase 'to not ordering' is incorrect; after 'to' we use the base form of the verb, so it should be 'to avoid ordering' or 'to not order'. Also, 'an' is a typo for 'and'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I also make a list for my work and I think that it work in it was very well for my task.

✓ Yes, I also make a list for my work and I think that it works very well for my task.

The verb 'work' should be in the third person singular form 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'in it was very well' is incorrect and removed for clarity.

× For example when I want to. Manage my task smoothly. I will list out them on the paper and I will warm priority which.

✓ For example, when I want to manage my tasks smoothly, I will list them out on paper and prioritize them.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'List out them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'list them out'. 'Warm priority which' is unclear and corrected to 'prioritize them' to convey the intended meaning.

× I believe some people don't like making this because they think it boring in future.

✓ I believe some people don't like making lists because they think it is boring in the future.

'Making this' is vague; it should be 'making lists' to refer to the activity. Also, 'it boring' lacks the verb 'is'. The phrase 'in future' is better expressed as 'in the future'.

× For example, maybe looking down their task is too boring for them, so maybe they just are remembering it and they don't need to have our list to keep the thing goes smoothly in a day.

✓ For example, maybe looking at their tasks is too boring for them, so maybe they just remember them and don't need to have a list to keep things going smoothly during the day.

'Looking down their task' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'looking at their tasks'. 'Just are remembering it' should be 'just remember them'. 'Our list' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'a list'. 'Keep the thing goes smoothly' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'keep things going smoothly'.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I only bring my phone right by sign me so I can check it every time I I think that I may be forgot what task.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I only bring my phone right by my side, so I can check it anytime. I think that I may forget tasks.

'Right by sign me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'right by my side'. 'Every time I I think that I may be forgot' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'anytime. I think that I may forget tasks.' 'May be forgot' should be 'may forget' as 'may' is followed by the base verb.