列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to make your sentences more concise and natural. For example, say "Yes, I make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time." Also, avoid redundancy like "while the time of shopping."

示例: Yes, I make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer clearly: start with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words. For example, "I don't usually make lists for house chores, but I always make a list when I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organised. It really helps me focus."

示例: I don't usually make lists for house chores, but I always make a list when I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organised. It really helps me focus.

建议: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and a bit unclear. Avoid repeating words and try to use linking words for coherence. For example, "In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it boring. Moreover, making lists reminds them of their responsibilities, which they may want to avoid."

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it boring. Moreover, making lists reminds them of their responsibilities, which they may want to avoid.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and has unclear phrases like "Biggest phone is available every time." Try to make your sentences complete and coherent. For example, "It depends. Sometimes I write lists on paper if it's available, but other times I use my phone because it's always with me and very convenient."

示例: It depends. Sometimes I write lists on paper if it's available, but other times I use my phone because it's always with me and very convenient.

× Yes, I do make a list before shopping because it is very convenient while the time of shopping for not forgetting the things you thought you would buy.

✓ Yes, I do make a list before shopping because it is very convenient during the time of shopping to avoid forgetting the things I thought I would buy.

The phrase 'while the time of shopping' is incorrect; 'during the time of shopping' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'for not forgetting' should be 'to avoid forgetting' to express purpose correctly.

× I don't really make a list for my house works or house chores, but.

✓ I don't really make a list for my housework or house chores.

The term 'house works' is incorrect; 'housework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'but.' which is incomplete and should be removed or completed.

× Whenever I study, I definitely make a list because it will be very easier for me to choose the topic Santa workup on them and it is very convenient for me.

✓ Whenever I study, I definitely make a list because it will be much easier for me to choose the topic and work on it, and it is very convenient for me.

The phrase 'very easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is the correct comparative adverb usage. 'Santa workup on them' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'work on it' for clarity.

× Yes, it had helped really.

✓ Yes, it has really helped.

The past perfect tense 'had helped' is incorrect here; present perfect 'has helped' is appropriate to indicate an action relevant to the present.

× Some people, according to my point of view, don't like making lists lists because they find this work boring and also this also this work of making lists leads to making them responsible toward their duties.

✓ Some people, in my opinion, don't like making lists because they find this work boring, and also this work of making lists makes them responsible for their duties.

The phrase 'according to my point of view' is better expressed as 'in my opinion'. Repetition of 'lists' is an error. 'Leads to making them responsible toward' is awkward; 'makes them responsible for' is correct.

× Sometimes I make lists on the paper whenever it is available and on.

✓ Sometimes I make lists on paper whenever it is available.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and on.' which is incomplete and should be removed.

× Other times I make a list on my phone. Which is very convenient for me too. Biggest phone is available every time.

✓ Other times, I make a list on my phone, which is very convenient for me too because my phone is always available.

The sentence 'Which is very convenient for me too.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence. 'Biggest phone is available every time.' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'my phone is always available' for clarity.