列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“a really well regulated people”应为“a really well-organized person”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复和犹豫词。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list in advance because it helps me remember the items I need and saves time.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺乏连贯性。建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I always make a rough schedule for my work because a detailed plan can confuse me and make me feel tired.

建议: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达观点，使用连接词，并给出具体原因。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and they prefer to do things spontaneously.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，避免重复和犹豫词。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to write and review them according to my habit.

× Yes, because I'm a really well regulated people and I will, I will make a list very early, which is include, UM, my favorite stuff and I really need. Uh.

✓ Yes, because I'm a really well-regulated person and I will make a list very early, which includes, um, my favorite stuff and what I really need.

people是复数，前面用的是单数主语I，应该用单数person。动词include应与主语list保持一致，使用第三人称单数形式includes。

× Yes, because I'm a really well regulated people and I will, I will make a list very early, which is include, UM, my favorite stuff and I really need. Uh.

✓ Yes, because I'm a really well-regulated person and I will make a list very early, which includes, um, my favorite stuff and what I really need.

well regulated应为well-regulated，形容词短语中间需要连字符连接。

× I always make a roof schedule about my work because I think Sasha. Elaborate set schedule will confused me and I will feel so tired about.

✓ I always make a rough schedule for my work because I think an elaborate set schedule will confuse me and I will feel very tired.

schedule后面应使用介词for表示“为……制定计划”，而不是about。confused应为动词原形confuse，因为主语是schedule，谓语动词。

× I always make a roof schedule about my work because I think Sasha. Elaborate set schedule will confused me and I will feel so tired about.

✓ I always make a rough schedule for my work because I think an elaborate set schedule will confuse me and I will feel very tired.

roof应为rough，拼写错误。so tired about表达不正确，应该用very tired。

× Respect him. Lots of people saying make a list somewhere, limit them to take their time and uh, they want to do something small freely and uh.

✓ Respectfully, lots of people say making a list limits them from taking their time and, uh, they want to do small things freely, uh.

原句中Respect him不合适，应该用副词respectfully表示“尊重地”。make a list somewhere表达不清，应改为making a list。limit them to take their time应改为limits them from taking their time，符合习惯用法。

× Respect him. Lots of people saying make a list somewhere, limit them to take their time and uh, they want to do something small freely and uh.

✓ Respectfully, lots of people say making a list limits them from taking their time and, uh, they want to do small things freely, uh.

limit后面应接from doing sth，表示限制某人做某事。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I think is is really depends on my habit. I like to, uh, using paper to make a dress or some list and I can uh.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think it really depends on my habit. I like to, uh, use paper to make a list or something and I can, uh.

think后面缺少主语it。using应改为动词原形use，因为前面是like to。make a dress应为make a list，语义更合理。