唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa tập trung vào câu hỏi chính là "Bạn có thích hát không?" mà lại nói nhiều về việc nghe nhạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Whenever I have free time, I like to sing my favorite songs to lift my mood.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I haven't ever learned" nên là "I have never learned". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. Instead, I try to learn by myself because I want to save money for my family, although I find it quite challenging to improve without a teacher.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng thì đúng và câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác như "their teachers is quite or talented person" và nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: I would like to sing for my primary school teacher because she was very kind and talented. I had a good relationship with her, so singing together would be enjoyable.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời câu hỏi về hát, không phải chỉ nghe nhạc. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "alas". Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and connect with others. For example, singing with friends often makes me feel joyful and relaxed.

× Actually, I am a person who like music.

✓ Actually, I am a person who likes music.

The verb 'like' must agree with the singular subject 'who' referring to 'a person'. Therefore, 'like' should be 'likes' to match the third person singular form.

× I can listen to music every day, day by day.

✓ I listen to music every day.

The phrase 'day by day' is redundant and unnecessary when 'every day' already expresses the frequency. Simplifying improves clarity and correctness.

× So I consider music a dispensable part of my life.

✓ So I consider music a indispensable part of my life.

The word 'dispensable' means 'not necessary', which contradicts the intended meaning. The correct adjective is 'indispensable', meaning 'essential' or 'necessary'.

× And when I have a spare time, I usually listen to music.

✓ And when I have spare time, I usually listen to music.

The phrase 'a spare time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun here. The article 'a' should be omitted.

× I haven't ever learned how to sing.

✓ I have never learned how to sing.

The adverb 'never' is more appropriate than 'haven't ever' in this context for negative present perfect sentences.

× I choose learn by myself, my own, because I want to save money for my family and I think I can't easy to learn by myself.

✓ I choose to learn by myself, on my own, because I want to save money for my family and I think I can't easily learn by myself.

The verb 'choose' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb. 'My own' should be 'on my own'. 'Easy' is an adjective but here an adverb 'easily' is needed to modify 'learn'. Also, 'can't easy to learn' is incorrect structure; it should be 'can't easily learn'.

× To be honest, I want to sing with my teacher when I studies in primary school.

✓ To be honest, I wanted to sing with my teacher when I studied in primary school.

The tense should be past ('wanted', 'studied') to match the time frame. Also, 'studies' is incorrect for first person singular past; it should be 'studied'.

× Their teachers is quite or talented person and I have a good communication with her when I study.

✓ Their teacher is quite a talented person and I had good communication with her when I studied.

'Teachers' is plural but 'is' is singular; since 'their' refers to one teacher, 'teacher' should be singular. 'Or' is incorrect here; 'a' is needed before 'talented person'. 'Have a good communication' should be 'had good communication' to match past tense. 'When I study' should be 'when I studied'.

× Certainly music brings many benefits and happiness to anyone.

✓ Certainly, music brings many benefits and happiness to everyone.

'Anyone' is used in questions or negatives; 'everyone' is appropriate for affirmative statements referring to all people.

× When someone said they turn on music, they will feel happy.

✓ When someone turns on music, they feel happy.

The sentence mixes past and future tenses incorrectly. Using present simple 'turns' and 'feel' is appropriate for general truths. 'Someone' is singular, so 'turns' is correct.

× But when you listen to music, alas, it will sadness.

✓ But when you listen to music, alas, it will bring sadness.

'It will sadness' is incorrect because 'sadness' is a noun and needs a verb. Adding 'bring' makes the sentence grammatically correct.