唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องตามหลักไวยากรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'I like singing because it makes me feel comfortable and calm. I am passionate about music, which is why I enjoy singing.' นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

示例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. Moreover, I am passionate about music, so singing allows me to express my emotions effectively.

建议: ควรตอบโดยใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น 'No, I haven't learned how to sing because it is just a hobby for me. I usually sing only in my free time.' และควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมูท

示例: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons because singing is just a hobby for me. I usually sing only when I have free time.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น 'I would like to sing for my crush because singing in front of someone you love can be very romantic.' และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำคำเดิม

示例: I would like to sing for my crush because I think it would be a romantic gesture to perform in front of someone I care about.

建议: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น 'Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because listening to music always lifts my mood. When singers perform, it makes me feel joyful and relaxed.' ควรหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์และใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I listen to music or hear someone sing, it always makes me feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes, I do love to sing because it made me feel comfortable and it made me feel calm.

✓ Yes, I do love to sing because it makes me feel comfortable and it makes me feel calm.

The sentence uses past tense 'made' but the context is about a general feeling, so present tense 'makes' is appropriate.

× And one of the reason that I like to listening, I like to singing is I I feel passionate to listening to music.

✓ And one of the reasons that I like listening and singing is that I feel passionate about listening to music.

The phrase 'one of the reason' should be 'one of the reasons' to agree in number. Also, 'like to listening' and 'like to singing' are incorrect verb forms; gerunds 'listening' and 'singing' should be used after 'like'. 'Passionate to listening' should be 'passionate about listening'.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing yet because I think it is my hobbies.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing yet because I think it is my hobby.

The word 'hobbies' is plural but the sentence refers to a singular hobby, so 'hobby' is correct here.

× I like to do it just when I have a free time.

✓ I like to do it just when I have free time.

The phrase 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable here and should not have the article 'a'.

× I don't know, maybe my maybe my crush because it may be very romantic to singing in front of the person that you love.

✓ I don't know, maybe my crush because it may be very romantic to sing in front of the person that you love.

The phrase 'to singing' should be 'to sing' after 'romantic'. Also, the repeated phrase 'maybe my' is redundant and removed.

× Sure, because I really like to listening to music and every time singer is singing it made me feel like I can. Leave it myself personally.

✓ Sure, because I really like listening to music and every time a singer is singing, it makes me feel like I can leave it myself personally.

The phrase 'like to listening' should be 'like listening'. 'Every time singer is singing' needs an article 'a' before 'singer'. 'It made me feel' should be 'it makes me feel' to match present tense. Also, the sentence was fragmented and corrected for clarity.