唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'where' không cần thiết và 'sing' nên chia đúng thì. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành cho hành động bắt đầu trong quá khứ và còn tiếp diễn, và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I do. I have loved singing since I was a child. For example, when I was in high school, I often sang in front of my friends and teachers, which made me feel confident and happy. I think singing helps me express my emotions and relax after a busy day.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm một số từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm phong phú nội dung.

示例: Yes, I studied at a public high school where singing was part of the music class. During the lessons, we learned how to sing properly and memorize many traditional and popular songs. I really enjoyed it because it helped me improve my voice and express my emotions through music.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ như 'make her fart' là không đúng và gây hiểu nhầm. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng những từ không phù hợp và chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đồng thời làm rõ ý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: I want to sing for my mom because she really enjoys listening to me sing and it always makes her happy. I have a strong passion for music, and singing traditional songs for her helps me feel connected to my culture and family. It's very special to see her smile when I sing.

建议: Bạn sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ thừa như 'uh' và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'she smile' thay vì 'she smiles'. Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn, tránh lặp từ và chú ý chia động từ đúng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

示例: Yes, absolutely. As I mentioned, I want to sing for my mom because she really enjoys listening to me. When I sing for her, she smiles, and I think singing is a wonderful way to bring happiness to people.

× I have loved singing where since I was a child.

✓ I have loved singing here since I was a child.

The word 'where' is incorrectly used; it should be 'here' to indicate the place. This is a preposition error, but since 'where' is used incorrectly in the present perfect sentence, it affects the present tense usage. Suggestion: use 'here' to correctly express location in present perfect tense.

× I often sing in front of my friends and my teachers, which make me feel confident and happy.

✓ I often sing in front of my friends and my teachers, which makes me feel confident and happy.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to the singular idea of singing, so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). This is a subject-verb agreement issue affecting present tense verbs.

× I think singing help me express my emotions and relax after a busy day.

✓ I think singing helps me express my emotions and relax after a busy day.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' because the subject 'singing' is singular. This is a subject-verb agreement error in present tense.

× I often sing in front of my friends and my teachers, which make me feel confident and happy.

✓ I often sang in front of my friends and my teachers, which made me feel confident and happy.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a high school student'), so the verbs should be in past tense: 'sang' and 'made'. This is a past tense issue.

× I want to sing for my mom because she really enjoys listening to me sing and it's always make me make her fart, make her happy.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she really enjoys listening to me sing and it always makes me make her laugh, make her happy.

The phrase 'it's always make me make her fart' is incorrect. 'It's' should be 'it', and 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'make her fart' is likely a mistake for 'make her laugh'. This is a subject-verb agreement and word choice error.

× I have a strong passion for music and singing traditional songs for her helped me feel connected to my culture and family.

✓ I have a strong passion for music and singing traditional songs for her helps me feel connected to my culture and family.

The verb 'helped' should be 'helps' to agree with the present tense context and singular subject 'singing traditional songs'. This is a tense and subject-verb agreement issue.

× It's very special to see her smile when I book.

✓ It's very special to see her smile when I sing.

The word 'book' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'sing' to match the topic. This is a word choice error affecting present tense meaning.

× she really enjoy listening to me

✓ she really enjoys listening to me

The verb 'enjoy' should be 'enjoys' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. This is a subject-verb agreement error in present tense.

× when I singing for her she smile

✓ when I sing for her she smiles

The verb 'singing' should be 'sing' to fit the present tense after 'when I', and 'smile' should be 'smiles' to agree with third person singular subject 'she'. This is a verb form and subject-verb agreement error.