唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有一些语法和拼写错误，比如“seeing”应为“singing”，“complete”应为“compliment”。建议注意单词拼写和语法的准确性，同时回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗长。

示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel confident when others compliment my voice. Also, singing helps me express my emotions and connect with people.

建议: 回答中有拼写错误，“signed”应为“signed me up for”。建议注意介词和短语的正确使用，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I have. When I was a child, my mother signed me up for an after-school singing class.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并注意连贯性。

示例: The first person who comes to my mind is my singing teacher. I want to sing for her to show how much I have improved since I was a child and to receive her praise.

建议: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，如“thing”应为“singing”，“I singing”应为“I sing”。建议注意句子结构和单词使用，使表达更准确自然。

示例: Yes, I completely agree because singing allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, when I was depressed, singing helped me release negative feelings and feel more relaxed.

× I really enjoy seeing because I think my voice sounds pleasant and when others complete me it boosts my confidence and singing is a great way for me to express my emotions and connect with people.

✓ I really enjoy singing because I think my voice sounds pleasant and when others compliment me it boosts my confidence and singing is a great way for me to express my emotions and connect with people.

这里动词 enjoy 后面应该接动名词形式，seeing 应改为 singing。

× when others complete me it boosts my confidence

✓ when others compliment me it boosts my confidence

complete 是“完成”的意思，句中应为“称赞”，应使用 compliment。

× my mother signed a after school class for me to learn how to sing.

✓ my mother signed me up for an after-school class to learn how to sing.

signed 后应接宾语和介词短语，且冠词使用错误，应为 an after-school class。

× the first people comes into my mind is my singing teacher

✓ the first person who comes to my mind is my singing teacher

people 是复数，句中应使用单数 person，且动词 comes 与单数主语 person 一致。

× I can't I can't seem as well as now.

✓ I couldn't sing as well as now.

这里表达过去能力，应该用情态动词 could 的过去式 couldn't，且句子结构不完整。

× So I want to show her my improvement so I can get phrase from her.

✓ So I want to show her my improvement so I can get praise from her.

phrase 是短语，句中应为 praise（称赞）。

× because thing allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress.

✓ because singing allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress.

thing 是单数名词，句意应为“唱歌”，应使用 singing。

× when I was depressed, I singing helps me release my negative feelings and I can feel more relaxed.

✓ when I was depressed, singing helped me release my negative feelings and I could feel more relaxed.

主语应为动名词 singing，且时态应与过去时间状语一致，动词用过去式 helped 和 could。