唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me feel better when I am sad. I usually listen to energetic and romantic songs. For example, Karunajla is my favorite singer, and I enjoy listening to his songs because they uplift my mood.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating phrases and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I learnt singing in school when I was in fifth grade. My music teacher was very talented and taught me many lessons. Since childhood, I have been interested in learning devotional songs.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases and ensure your sentences are complete and connected logically.

示例: I like to sing for my family and friends because they always appreciate my singing skills. For example, my friends often tell me that I have a melodious voice, which encourages me to sing more.

建议: Your answer is relevant but wordy and repetitive. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely using appropriate linking words. Use specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

示例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. When people sing songs they like, it makes them feel energetic and improves their mood.

× I always prefer to sing when I feel sad because it uplift my mood.

✓ I always prefer to sing when I feel sad because it uplifts my mood.

The verb 'uplift' should be in the third person singular present tense 'uplifts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb form in the present tense.

× I always listen the energetic and romantic songs.

✓ I always listen to energetic and romantic songs.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is incorrect usage of prepositions.

× Karunajla is my favorite singer. I always love to consider his songs or listen for.

✓ Karunajla is my favorite singer. I always love to listen to his songs.

The phrase 'consider his songs or listen for' is incorrect. 'Consider' is not appropriate here, and 'listen for' is incorrect without an object. The correct phrase is 'listen to his songs'. Also, 'his' is correct if Karunajla is male; otherwise, pronoun should match gender.

× Yes, in my school when I was in fifth standard, my music teacher taught me about some lessons, taught me some lessons about the singing.

✓ Yes, in my school when I was in fifth standard, my music teacher taught me some lessons about singing.

The phrase 'taught me about some lessons, taught me some lessons' is redundant and awkward. Also, 'about the singing' should be 'about singing' without 'the'. The past tense 'taught' is correct here.

× He was very good and very talented teacher.

✓ He was a very good and very talented teacher.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very good and very talented teacher'. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.

× Since my childhood I always considered learn music about devotee songs or leads.

✓ Since my childhood, I have always considered learning music about devotional songs or leads.

The phrase 'considered learn music' is incorrect; it should be 'considered learning music'. Also, 'devotee songs' is incorrect; the correct term is 'devotional songs'. The present perfect tense 'have always considered' fits better with 'since my childhood'.

× So such as I like to sing for my friends because they always appreciate me for my singing skills and for my voice, because he always said I have a melodious voice.

✓ I like to sing for my friends because they always appreciate me for my singing skills and my voice, because they always say I have a melodious voice.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to 'friends' which is plural; it should be 'they'. Also, 'such as' is unnecessary and awkward here.

× So I like to listen. I like.

✓ So I like to listen. I like it.

The sentence 'I like.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it' clarifies the object of liking.

× Singing makes people happy because most of the population or most of the public, when they sing songs about their choice, about according to their taste, they feel energetic and they always feel and it makes their moods uplift.

✓ Singing makes people happy because most of the population or most of the public, when they sing songs of their choice according to their taste, they feel energetic and it uplifts their mood.

The phrase 'about their choice, about according to their taste' is redundant and awkward; 'songs of their choice according to their taste' is correct. Also, 'makes their moods uplift' is incorrect; it should be 'it uplifts their mood'. The singular 'mood' is more natural here.