唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về cảm giác khi hát và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như "It gives me a comfortable feeling after hard work at school."

示例: Yes, I really like singing because it gives me a comfortable feeling and helps me relax after a hard day at school.

建议: Bạn cần hoàn thành câu trả lời và tránh để câu bị dang dở. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và nói rõ hơn về trải nghiệm học hát của bạn.

示例: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took a few singing classes which helped me understand basic vocal techniques and improve my voice.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai như "send" thay vì "sing". Hãy nói rõ ràng về đối tượng bạn muốn hát cho và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: I would like to sing for my parents, my friends, and my family. In the future, I hope to sing for a larger audience.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "when music can". Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do tại sao hát giúp giảm stress.

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music helps reduce stress and makes people feel relaxed after hard work.

× Yes, I really like singing because it gives me comfortable feeling and after a hard work at school.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because it gives me a comfortable feeling after hard work at school.

The adjective 'comfortable' needs an article 'a' before 'comfortable feeling' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'a hard work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun here, so 'hard work' without 'a' is correct. The phrase 'and after a hard work at school' is awkward; it should be 'after hard work at school' to express the idea properly.

× So learning is.

✓ So learning is helpful.

The sentence 'So learning is.' is incomplete and lacks a complement to complete the meaning. Adding an adjective like 'helpful' completes the sentence and clarifies the intended meaning.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the audience. Using 'for' is less common and can be considered incorrect in this context.

× I would like to send for my parents, my friends or my family or people.

✓ I would like to sing for my parents, my friends, my family, or other people.

The verb 'send' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'sing'. Also, the list of people should be separated by commas and 'or people' is vague; 'other people' is clearer.

× But in the future, I want to say to audience.

✓ But in the future, I want to sing to an audience.

The verb 'say' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'sing'. Also, 'audience' is a singular collective noun and needs an article 'an' before it.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when music can reduce stress after a hard work.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music can reduce stress after hard work.

The phrase 'because when music can reduce stress' is incorrect; 'when' is unnecessary and breaks the sentence structure. Also, 'a hard work' is incorrect; 'hard work' is uncountable and should not have 'a'.