唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer does not address the question about singing and contains grammatical errors. To improve, directly answer the question about singing, use correct grammar, and keep your response clear and relevant.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and makes me feel happy.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, clearly state your experience with singing lessons, use proper tense, and organize your ideas logically.

示例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I learned some songs from my mom when I was a child. For many people, singing is just a leisure activity.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has repetition and minor grammatical errors. To improve, avoid repeating words, use correct sentence structure, and provide a clear reason.

示例: I want to sing for my child because she is very cute, and singing lullabies helps her fall asleep when she feels uncomfortable.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer expressions to convey your thoughts.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because when you feel down, singing songs can lift your mood and also make people around you happy.

× I like swimming because every time when I see me I can feel relaxing.

✓ I like swimming because every time I see myself, I can feel relaxed.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the object of 'see'; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'myself'. Also, 'feel relaxing' is incorrect; it should be 'feel relaxed' to describe the speaker's feeling.

× Actually, I never learn how to sing, just when I was a child.

✓ Actually, I never learned how to sing, except when I was a child.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to match the past time reference. Also, 'just when' is better expressed as 'except when' for clarity.

× I just learned from my mom. But actually a lot of professional it's just leisure time.

✓ I just learned from my mom. But actually, for a lot of professionals, it's just leisure time.

The sentence is missing prepositions and articles to clarify meaning. 'A lot of professional' should be 'a lot of professionals', and the phrase needs 'for' to indicate the context. Also, a comma after 'actually' improves readability.

× I want to sing for my child because she's very cute and sometimes when she is uncomfortable to go to sleep I will sing for her some some kids kids songs.

✓ I want to sing for my child because she's very cute, and sometimes when she is uncomfortable going to sleep, I will sing some kids' songs for her.

The phrase 'uncomfortable to go to sleep' is incorrect; it should be 'uncomfortable going to sleep'. Also, 'some some kids kids songs' is repetitive and should be 'some kids' songs'. The placement of 'for her' is better at the end for clarity.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you feel down, if you singing some songs, maybe some people near you makes them very happy and make them happiness.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you feel down, if you sing some songs, maybe some people near you will feel very happy and be happy.

The phrase 'if you singing' is incorrect; it should be 'if you sing' using the base form after 'if'. Also, 'makes them very happy and make them happiness' is ungrammatical; it should be 'will feel very happy and be happy' to express the result properly.