唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural and coherent.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing very much. I have liked it since I was a child because it helps me relax after a busy day. Whenever I have free time, I sing to relieve stress and feel happier.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

示例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I do not plan to become a professional singer. However, I enjoy singing along to my favourite songs when I listen to music at home or outside.

建议: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add specific details about your favourite group and why you want to sing with them, using linking words for coherence.

示例: I would love to sing with my favourite K-pop group, BTS. I have been a big fan since I was a child because all the members are talented and inspiring. Singing with them would be a great challenge and an amazing experience.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then explain your opinion with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For me, singing helps me relax and reduces stress after a long day. It also allows me to express my emotions and feel more positive.

× Just I like singing and when I was a child I have a become too.

✓ I just like singing and when I was a child I also became interested in it.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb form. 'Just I like' should be 'I just like' to follow correct English syntax. 'I have a become too' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'I also became'. The sentence structure needs to be clear and logical.

× I have agreed to become single and I singing every time I can because it makes me feel really stressed and relaxed after all day busy.

✓ I have agreed to become single and I sing every time I can because it makes me feel less stressed and relaxed after a busy day.

The phrase 'I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing' to match the subject and tense. 'After all day busy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'after a busy day'. Also, 'makes me feel really stressed and relaxed' is contradictory; likely intended 'less stressed and relaxed'.

× No, because now singer is not my dream.

✓ No, because being a singer is not my dream now.

The sentence lacks the verb 'being' to correctly express the state of 'singer'. The modal or auxiliary verb is missing to form the correct noun phrase 'being a singer'.

× So I always think when I like it and for example when I go out and listen a great music, a great music and after this at home I singing this music is very.

✓ So I always think about when I like it, for example, when I go out and listen to great music, and after that at home I sing this music a lot.

The verb 'think' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to thoughts. 'Listen a great music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to great music'. 'I singing' should be 'I sing'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear, so it has been restructured for clarity.

× When I was a child, I have a big fan of K pop, especially ETS.

✓ When I was a child, I was a big fan of K-pop, especially BTS.

The phrase 'I have a big fan' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I was a big fan'. Also, 'ETS' seems to be a typo for 'BTS', a popular K-pop group. 'K pop' should be hyphenated as 'K-pop'.

× It's a group have same members and all of them is a challenge so I really want to sing with them.

✓ It's a group that has the same members and all of them are talented, so I really want to sing with them.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'group'. 'All of them is' should be 'all of them are' to agree with the plural subject 'them'. 'Is a challenge' is unclear; likely intended 'are talented' or similar.

× Yes, I think music can bring people. Relax from myself I really like to sing and it makes me feel really stressed and I always think when I.

✓ Yes, I think music can bring happiness to people. Personally, I really like to sing because it helps me relax and makes me feel less stressed.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Music can bring people' is incomplete; it should be 'music can bring happiness to people'. 'Relax from myself' is incorrect; 'helps me relax' is correct. The sentence 'I always think when I' is incomplete and has been omitted for clarity.