唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且存在语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I take a bath after coming home because it helps me relax and feel comfortable.

建议: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明学习经历。

示例: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing, except for singing together with my classmates in elementary school.

建议: 回答较为冗长且表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达想为自己唱歌的原因，并使用连词使句子更流畅。

示例: I prefer to sing for myself because I enjoy spending time alone and it helps me relax.

建议: 回答内容较为模糊，语法和表达不够准确。建议明确表达唱歌带来快乐的观点，并举例说明。

示例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. For example, famous singers and bands often inspire and uplift audiences around the world.

× Yeah, I like singing, especially when I'm, uh, go go back home and taking a bath.

✓ Yeah, I like singing, especially when I'm, uh, going back home and taking a bath.

动词go后面接动名词形式，表示正在进行的动作，应该用going而不是go。

× It's quite unwind and made me feel uncomfortable.

✓ It's quite unwinding and makes me feel comfortable.

unwind是动词，形容词形式应为unwinding，且句子时态应保持一致，made改为makes，uncomfortable应改为comfortable，表达放松的感觉。

× No, I only have learned singing in my elementary school.

✓ No, I only learned singing in my elementary school.

have learned是现在完成时，表示过去发生的动作应使用一般过去时learned。

× We have when I was a child.

✓ We did when I was a child.

句子缺少谓语动词，使用did代替have，符合过去时态。

× We have the same class and sing the same song together.

✓ We had the same class and sang the same song together.

描述过去的动作，谓语动词应使用过去时had和sang。

× If you ask me, I think I want think for myself, 'cause I don't have so much friends and I prefer, uh, doing things and go outside with myself.

✓ If you ask me, I think I want to think for myself, 'cause I don't have many friends and I prefer, uh, doing things and going outside by myself.

want后应接不定式to think；so much用于不可数名词，friends是可数名词，应使用many；go outside后应使用动名词going；with myself用法不当，改为by myself更自然。

× So if there needs to be someone I have to sing to, I think it's myself.

✓ So if there needs to be someone I have to sing to, I think it's me.

myself是反身代词，不能用作宾语，宾语应使用me。

× Yes, I think I'll definitely say we'll have happiness to people and we have a lot of orchestra and.

✓ Yes, I think I can definitely say singing brings happiness to people, and we have a lot of orchestras and

使用情态动词can表达能力或确定性更合适；have happiness to people表达不自然，改为bring happiness to people；orchestra应为复数orchestras。

× Teams like the band or the famous singers that brings the world a lot of happiness make the world better.

✓ Teams like bands or famous singers that bring the world a lot of happiness make the world better.

band应使用复数形式bands；谓语动词与复数主语singers保持一致，使用bring。