唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start directly by stating your opinion, then support it with clear reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like 'good in singing'.

示例: I don't like singing because I am not very good at it. However, I enjoy listening to soft music as it helps me relax and refresh my mind.

建议: Respond directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use proper grammar such as 'good at singing' and link your sentences smoothly.

示例: No, I have never tried to learn singing because I believe my voice is not very good.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using appropriate expressions like 'little brother' and linking your ideas logically.

示例: I like to sing for my little brother because he is very young and my singing helps him fall asleep.

建议: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your opinion clearly and naturally.

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. When someone feels stressed or frustrated, singing helps them feel calm and peaceful, which improves their mood.

× I am not good in singing.

✓ I am not good at singing.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. So, it should be 'good at singing'. This is a common collocation in English.

× I enjoyed listening music very much.

✓ I enjoyed listening to music very much.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Therefore, it should be 'listening to music'.

× I didn't try to learn to sing because I'm not good in singing and I never tried because my voice is not so good.

✓ I didn't try to learn to sing because I'm not good at singing and I never tried because my voice is not so good.

Again, 'good' should be followed by 'at' not 'in'. So, 'good at singing' is correct.

× I love to sing for my small brother because he's too small and he sleeps when I sing a song.

✓ I love to sing for my little brother because he's very young and he sleeps when I sing a song.

While 'small brother' is understandable, the more natural adjective is 'little' when referring to age or size of a sibling. Also, 'too small' can imply a problem, so 'very young' is clearer. This is more about adjective choice but relates to natural usage.

× when a person feel frustration or any kind of stress in mind so by singing it can be corrected because while singing a person became calm, peaceful and enjoy.

✓ when a person feels frustration or any kind of stress in the mind, singing can help because while singing a person becomes calm, peaceful and enjoys.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject 'a person' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'in mind' should be 'in the mind' (article usage). 'became' should be 'becomes' to maintain present tense. 'enjoy' should be 'enjoys' to agree with singular subject.