唱歌— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
I don't really like singing because I think my voice is quite noisy.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
No, I didn't. I think singing is not my cup of tea. It's quite it's quite technical and difficult for me as my voice not got gifted. I don't really have interest on singing.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
As I mentioned earlier, I don't like to sing at all, but if I had to sing or sing in front of my wife, I'll try to make him make her impressed because I love her a lot.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
I do believe it, it may help people to create their happiness in them, but not for me because whenever I try to sing and record it, it sounds like noise and buzz. I don't have that thing, but some people do love singing.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分数: 65.0建议: Try to give a more positive and natural response by explaining your feelings clearly and avoiding negative words like "noisy" which may sound unnatural. Use linking words to make your answer smoother.
示例: I don't enjoy singing very much because I feel my voice isn't very pleasant. However, I appreciate music and sometimes listen to my favorite songs.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分数: 60.0建议: Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use correct tense and structure. Also, try to explain your opinion with linking words to make your answer coherent.
示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I find it quite technical and difficult. Moreover, I don't have much interest in singing as I don't think I have a natural talent for it.
Who do you want to sing for?
分数: 70.0建议: Be careful with pronouns and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, keep sentences concise and clear.
示例: As I said before, I don't like singing, but if I had to sing for someone, it would be my wife. I would try my best to impress her because I love her very much.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分数: 68.0建议: Try to express your ideas more naturally and avoid awkward phrases. Use linking words to contrast your opinion with others and provide clear reasons.
示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to many people because it allows them to express their emotions. However, for me, singing is not enjoyable since I don't have a good voice and it sounds unpleasant when I try.
语法
× No, I didn't.
✓ No, I haven't.
The question 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' requires a present perfect tense response to indicate experience up to now. 'Didn't' is simple past and does not fit here. Use 'haven't' to correctly answer the present perfect question.
× It's quite it's quite technical and difficult for me as my voice not got gifted.
✓ It's quite technical and difficult for me as my voice is not gifted.
The sentence has repetition and missing verb 'is' in 'my voice not got gifted'. Correct sentence structure requires 'my voice is not gifted' to be grammatically correct.
× I don't really have interest on singing.
✓ I don't really have interest in singing.
The correct preposition to use with 'interest' is 'in', not 'on'. So, 'interest in singing' is the proper phrase.
× I'll try to make him make her impressed because I love her a lot.
✓ I'll try to make her impressed because I love her a lot.
The pronoun 'him' is incorrect here and redundant. The correct pronoun is 'her' to refer to the wife. Also, 'make her impressed' is acceptable here.
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