唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和用词不当（如“seeing”应为“singing”），且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意单词拼写和语法，简洁明了地表达观点，同时避免重复。

示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I often sing with my friends at karaoke, which is also a great way to socialize and have fun together.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如“learned how to say informal”不合适），句子重复且结构混乱。建议使用正确的句型，清晰表达自己是自学唱歌，并简洁说明学钢琴的帮助。

示例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I am a big fan of pop music and have taught myself to sing by listening a lot. Since I have played the piano since I was young, it has helped me understand music better and sing more easily.

建议: 回答表达了想为父母唱歌的原因，但句子较长且有语法错误（如“seeing singing”应为“singing”），建议简化句子，注意语法，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I definitely want to sing for my parents because I am quite shy. Singing in front of strangers makes me nervous, but my parents always encourage me and give me helpful advice.

建议: 回答表达了唱歌带来快乐的观点，但部分表达不够自然（如“learn to sing in a pretty way”），且句子结构稍显重复。建议使用更自然的表达，丰富细节，并注意句子连贯。

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Nowadays, many people face a lot of stress, so singing has become a popular way to relax and improve their mood.

× Definitely, I'm really crazy about seeing because I think a singing is a good way for me to relax myself and I often sing with my friends in AKTV and it's a good way for me to communicate with my friends.

✓ Definitely, I'm really crazy about singing because I think singing is a good way for me to relax myself and I often sing with my friends in KTV and it's a good way for me to communicate with my friends.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌的。'a singing'中'singing'是不可数名词，不需要冠词'a'。另外，'AKTV'应为'KTV'，可能是拼写错误。

× I have never learned how to say informal.

✓ I have never learned how to sing formally.

原句中'say informal'不符合语境，应为'sing formally'，表示学过正式唱歌。这里需要用过去分词learned，时态正确。

× I really listen a lot of them and I and I learn to sing by myself.

✓ I really listen to a lot of them and I learn to sing by myself.

'listen'后面需要加介词'to'，'a lot of them'指代歌曲，正确。重复的'I and I'应去掉一个。

× Since I have learned learn piano since I was very young, so it was not very hard for me to sing well.

✓ Since I have learned piano since I was very young, it was not very hard for me to sing well.

'have learned learn'重复，应去掉一个'learn'。句中'so'多余，去掉更通顺。

× Well definitely I want to sing for my parents since I'm a girl who is not very outgoing and seeing singing to a person who is not very familiar to me is very embarrassing and my parents will encourage me and give me some advice.

✓ Well definitely I want to sing for my parents since I'm a girl who is not very outgoing and singing to a person who is not very familiar to me is very embarrassing and my parents will encourage me and give me some advice.

'seeing singing'应为'singing'，去掉多余的'seeing'。

× Since the development of society, people nowadays face much pressure and more and more people learn to sing in a pretty way and it's a good way for them to relax.

✓ With the development of society, people nowadays face much pressure and more and more people learn to sing in a proper way and it's a good way for them to relax.

'Since the development of society'用'With the development of society'更合适。'in a pretty way'表达不当，应为'in a proper way'表示以合适的方式。