唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and is somewhat incomplete. Try to use correct verb forms and complete your sentences. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

示例: Yes, I love singing because it allows me to explore my emotions and express positive energy.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tense and sentence structure, and avoid informal expressions like 'I'm always watched'.

示例: Actually, no, but I am trying to learn by myself by watching singing tutorials on YouTube and other social media platforms.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors and unclear words like 'Posi'. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me during difficult times and bring positivity into my life.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

示例: I am sure that singing can bring happiness to people because it helps us express gratitude and share positive emotions with others.

× Yes, I love singing because when I singing I feel I can explore my emotion and I can express my positive energy and.

✓ Yes, I love singing because when I sing I feel I can explore my emotions and I can express my positive energy.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'when I'. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' to indicate the action. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context of multiple feelings. The sentence was also incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× Actually no, but I'm trying to learn by myself like I'm always watched on the YouTube how to sing well and in other social media.

✓ Actually no, but I'm trying to learn by myself; I always watch YouTube videos on how to sing well and other social media.

The phrase 'I'm always watched' is incorrect; it should be 'I always watch' to indicate the present habitual action. 'On the YouTube' is incorrect; 'YouTube' does not need 'the'. Also, 'in other social media' should be 'on other social media'.

× I want to sing for my family because my family always beside me when I'm in down life there they always come to my life with Posi, they're positive.

✓ I want to sing for my family because my family is always beside me when I'm down in life; they always bring positivity to my life.

The phrase 'my family always beside me' lacks the verb 'is'. 'I'm in down life' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm down in life'. 'They always come to my life with Posi' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'they always bring positivity to my life'. Also, 'Posi' is likely a typo for 'positive' or 'positivity'.

× I 100% for sure singing can bring happiness to people because when we singing we can showing gratitude for constant positivity and then we can express our emotion and share our positive.

✓ I am 100% sure singing can bring happiness to people because when we sing we can show gratitude for constant positivity and then we can express our emotions and share our positivity.

The phrase 'I 100% for sure singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I am 100% sure singing'. 'When we singing' should be 'when we sing'. 'We can showing' should be 'we can show'. 'Our emotion' should be plural 'our emotions'. 'Share our positive' is incomplete; it should be 'share our positivity'.