唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I like singing sometimes because it helps me relax and reduce stress. Even though I don't have a good singing voice, I enjoy singing along to my favourite songs. It makes me feel comfortable and happy.

建议: Answer directly and clearly. Use proper grammar and avoid repetition. Explain your reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep your answer focused and within 5 sentences.

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't have a good voice. Also, I am not very interested in singing as a hobby. I believe becoming a singer requires talent, which I don't have.

建议: Make your answer more organized and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words like 'but' or 'however'. Use correct sentence structure and avoid unnecessary repetition.

示例: I don't really want to sing for anyone in particular. However, my brothers like to sing for me on my birthday. I usually only sing 'Happy Birthday' songs with my family during celebrations.

建议: Provide a clear and direct answer. Use linking words like 'because' or 'but' to explain your opinion. Use correct grammar and avoid vague expressions. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

示例: I think singing can bring happiness to some people because it helps them express their feelings. However, others may prefer to listen to songs rather than sing because they feel shy or lack confidence.

× Yes, I like singing sometimes although I have no good voice for the singing but I like to sing a song with the lyric of when I listening my favorite singer song and it helps me to distress my stress and I feel more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like singing sometimes although I have no good voice for singing, but I like to sing a song with the lyrics of my favorite singer's song when I am listening to it, and it helps me to relieve my stress and I feel more relaxed and comfortable.

The sentence has incorrect use of verb forms and prepositions. 'Listening' should be in the present participle form with 'am' to form the present continuous tense ('I am listening'). 'Distress my stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve my stress'. Also, 'the lyric of when I listening my favorite singer song' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'the lyrics of my favorite singer's song when I am listening to it'. Prepositions like 'to' are missing after 'listening'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I have never learned singing because I am I have no good voice.

✓ I have never learned to sing because I do not have a good voice.

The phrase 'learned singing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learned to sing' because 'learn' is followed by the infinitive verb. Also, 'I am I have no good voice' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'I do not have a good voice' to express lack of ability properly.

× I think to become a singer and a person should be good voice and any talent.

✓ I think to become a singer, a person should have a good voice and some talent.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction and missing verbs. 'And a person should be good voice' is incorrect; it should be 'a person should have a good voice'. Also, 'and any talent' is awkward; 'and some talent' is more appropriate. The conjunction 'and' is used correctly but the sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× But I'm not too much interested in this hobby so that's why I have no love to be learning.

✓ But I'm not very interested in this hobby, so that's why I do not want to learn it.

'Too much interested' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'very interested'. 'I have no love to be learning' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I do not want to learn it'. The pronoun 'it' refers to the hobby, and the verb form 'to be learning' is incorrect here.

× To sing for I don't want to I don't really want to be sing for anyone but my brothers like to sing a song for myself on every on my every birthday and I only sing the song with the ram with my family member when any person celebrate their birthday like happy birthday song and.

✓ I don't really want to sing for anyone, but my brothers like to sing a song for me on my birthday. I only sing songs with my family members when someone celebrates their birthday, like singing the happy birthday song.

The original sentence is confusing and has multiple structural errors. 'To sing for I don't want to' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't really want to sing for anyone'. 'Myself' is incorrectly used instead of 'me'. 'On every on my every birthday' is redundant and incorrect; 'on my birthday' suffices. 'With the ram with my family member' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'with my family members'. The sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It's depend on the persons on peoples don't like to singing and they give preference to listen the song because some persons have you know good voice and they sing any song feel irritated and low confidence so that's why they don't like to be singing.

✓ It depends on the person. Some people don't like singing and prefer to listen to songs because some people, you know, have good voices, and when others sing, they feel irritated and have low confidence. That's why they don't like to sing.

'It's depend' should be 'It depends' to agree with the singular subject. 'Peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is the correct plural form. 'Don't like to singing' should be 'don't like singing' or 'don't like to sing'. 'Give preference to listen the song' should be 'prefer to listen to songs'. 'Feel irritated and low confidence' is incorrect; it should be 'feel irritated and have low confidence'. The modal verb 'don't like to be singing' is better expressed as 'don't like to sing'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.