唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

示例: No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it. I prefer to express myself through writing rather than singing.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'learned how to think' thay vì 'learned how to sing'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, đúng ngữ pháp và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have learned how to sing from my brother and father. They are good singers, and I enjoyed learning from them because they were patient teachers.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu điều kiện đúng và hoàn thiện ý tưởng, tránh bỏ dở câu.

示例: If I had the ability to sing, I would sing for my mother and father to express my love and gratitude to them.

建议: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'address' không phù hợp). Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn và câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, definitely. Singing, like listening to music, can bring happiness to people. It helps those who feel sad or bored to release their energy and feel refreshed.

× I don't much keen on singing because I don't want to express myself by the song instead of I can express myself by writing or some kind of.

✓ I am not very keen on singing because I don't want to express myself by song; instead, I can express myself by writing or something like that.

The phrase 'I don't much keen' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I am not very keen'. Also, 'by the song' should be 'by song' or 'through song'. The phrase 'some kind of' is incomplete and should be 'something like that'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I have ever learned how to think like I learned from my brother and my father because they are umm good singer in my house umm so I really enjoy to learn how to sing by them and they give me a patience for teach me how to sing so I really.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing from my brother and my father because they are good singers in my house. I really enjoy learning how to sing from them, and they are patient in teaching me how to sing.

The phrase 'have ever learned' is incorrect; 'have learned' is appropriate. 'How to think' should be 'how to sing'. 'Good singer' should be plural 'good singers' to agree with 'they'. 'Enjoy to learn' should be 'enjoy learning'. 'Give me a patience' is incorrect; it should be 'are patient'. These corrections fix tense, pluralization, and verb form errors.

× If I had a chance or abilities to sing, I will.

✓ If I had a chance or the ability to sing, I would.

In the second conditional, the correct structure is 'If + past simple, would + base verb'. 'I will' is incorrect here; it should be 'I would'. Also, 'abilities' should be singular 'ability' to match the context.

× because they are umm good singer in my house

✓ because they are good singers in my house

The subject 'they' is plural, so the noun 'singer' should be plural 'singers' to agree in number.

× I really enjoy to learn how to sing by them

✓ I really enjoy learning how to sing from them

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('learning'), not an infinitive ('to learn'). Also, 'by them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from them' when indicating the source of learning.

× and they give me a patience for teach me how to sing

✓ and they are patient in teaching me how to sing

'Give me a patience' is incorrect because 'patience' is an uncountable noun and cannot be given as an object. The correct expression is 'they are patient in teaching me'.

× I want to express myself by the song instead of I can express myself by writing or some kind of.

✓ I want to express myself through song, but I can express myself better by writing or something similar.

The phrase 'instead of I can express myself' is incorrect; it should be 'but I can express myself'. Also, 'by the song' should be 'through song'. 'Some kind of' is incomplete and should be 'something similar' or 'something like that'.

× Singing can bring happiness to people, especially for the for those who were sad or tedious at any time

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people, especially to those who are sad or bored at any time

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary before 'those'. Also, 'were sad or tedious' is incorrect; 'are sad or bored' is appropriate to describe current feelings. 'Tedious' is an adjective meaning boring, but 'bored' is the correct adjective to describe a person's feeling.