唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, neden şarkı söylemeyi sevmediğinizi açıkça belirtin ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

示例: I don't really enjoy singing because I feel a bit awkward when I do it. Although some friends say I have a voice suitable for jazz, I still prefer to listen rather than sing myself.

建议: Cevabınız kısa ve doğrudan, ancak daha doğal bir ifade için 'No, I haven't' kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, kısa bir açıklama ekleyerek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

示例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I enjoy singing casually with friends.

建议: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmaya özen gösterin. Ayrıca, niyetinizi net bir şekilde ifade edin.

示例: I don't really want to sing for anyone, especially not for fame or money. Singing is not something I plan to pursue seriously.

建议: Cümleniz karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Bilimsel bir görüşü aktarırken daha net ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, görüşünüzü destekleyen daha spesifik detaylar ekleyin.

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. A science professor once said that listening to popular songs can improve your mood, which I find believable.

× Actually I don't like to sing but some people are saying my voice are enough to be making jazz voice.

✓ Actually I don't like to sing but some people are saying my voice is enough to make jazz vocals.

The subject 'voice' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'to be making jazz voice' is awkward; 'to make jazz vocals' is more natural.

× Actually that's calms me weird and awkward actually.

✓ Actually that calms me and makes me feel weird and awkward.

The verb 'calms' should not be preceded by 'that's' (that is). Also, 'calms me weird and awkward' is incorrect; it should be 'calms me and makes me feel weird and awkward' to express the intended meaning.

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I haven't.

The question 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' requires the present perfect tense in the answer, so 'I haven't' is correct instead of 'I didn't'.

× My girlfriends for fame for money actually, but it's not true of that and not included.

✓ My girlfriends, for fame and money actually, but that's not true and not included.

The phrase 'it's not true of that' is incorrect; 'that's not true' is the correct expression. Also, 'for fame for money' should be 'for fame and money' for clarity.

× I will not do it probably.

✓ I probably will not do it.

The adverb 'probably' should be placed before the modal verb 'will' for correct word order.

× Sometimes yes, because in the science professor says you can be a little bit more happy when you hear a good popular song.

✓ Sometimes yes, because a science professor says you can be a little bit happier when you hear a good popular song.

The phrase 'in the science professor says' is incorrect; it should be 'a science professor says'. Also, 'more happy' should be 'happier'.

× I don't think it is good for your health, but if it's science says it's true.

✓ I don't think it is good for your health, but if science says it's true, then it is.

The phrase 'if it's science says' is incorrect; it should be 'if science says'. Also, the sentence needs completion for clarity.