唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, explain why singing makes you feel good and how your grandmother inspired you, but avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Whenever I go outside, I observe things around me and sometimes create songs inspired by those moments. I especially enjoy singing because my grandmother, who is a great singer, inspired me to love music.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear and direct response first, then add specific details about your learning experience. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I have learned how to sing from my grandmother. She is a very talented singer in my family and taught me not only singing techniques but also how to focus and express emotions through music.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly: first say who you want to sing for, then explain why. Use simple and correct sentences with linking words to connect your points.

示例: I want to sing for my beloved because he makes me feel special, and I want to express my feelings through a beautiful song. I also like to sing for my mother, even though she doesn't enjoy listening much, I still make songs for her to show my love.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When we feel sad, singing a cheerful song can improve our mood and make us feel better. Therefore, singing is a powerful way to share positive emotions.

× Yes, I do like singing because it's makes me feel like that.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because it makes me feel like that.

The auxiliary 'it' with 'makes' requires the verb to be in third person singular form without 's' after 'it'. 'It's makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes'.

× I started making it like a song.

✓ I start making it like a song.

The sentence describes a habitual action when going outside, so present tense 'start' is appropriate instead of past tense 'started'.

× I got inspired from my grandma.

✓ I got inspired by my grandma.

The correct preposition to use with 'inspired' is 'by', not 'from'. 'Inspired by' indicates the source of inspiration.

× She is one of the best singer for me.

✓ She is one of the best singers for me.

'One of the best' should be followed by a plural noun 'singers' not singular 'singer'.

× So I'm literally I like singing.

✓ So, I literally like singing.

The sentence has redundant pronoun 'I' after 'I'm'. Removing 'I'm' or 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× I learned it from my grandmother.

✓ I learned it from my grandmother.

This sentence is correct in past tense as it refers to a completed action in the past.

× She is very good and talented singer of my that whole family and she used to teach me how to sing, how to get involved in one thing and make this thing from the same thing.

✓ She is a very good and talented singer in my whole family and she used to teach me how to sing, how to get involved in something and make something from the same thing.

The sentence needed the article 'a' before 'very good and talented singer'. Also, 'of my that whole family' is incorrect; 'in my whole family' is correct. 'One thing' and 'this thing' are vague; 'something' is better here.

× I really want to sing for my beloved you deserve it and you make me feel like so special.

✓ I really want to sing for my beloved because you deserve it and you make me feel so special.

The sentence lacks conjunction 'because' to connect clauses properly. Also, 'like so special' should be 'so special' without 'like'.

× Though for that reason I want to make him special by singing a beautiful song for and making a beautiful song for him and my mother.

✓ For that reason, I want to make him special by singing a beautiful song for him and my mother.

The phrase 'for and making a beautiful song for him and my mother' is redundant and unclear. Simplifying to 'singing a beautiful song for him and my mother' improves clarity.

× Secondly my mother because she don't like that much listen to sing but I used to make a song for her.

✓ Secondly, my mother because she doesn't like to listen to singing that much but I used to make a song for her.

'She don't' is incorrect; it should be 'she doesn't' for third person singular. Also, 'listen to sing' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to singing' or 'listen to songs'.

× Yes, of course, singing is a kind of emotion.

✓ Yes, of course, singing is a kind of emotion.

This sentence is correct; no article error found.

× If we are sad, then if we started singing a song, a nice good and happy moment to one song, then our mood get out done.

✓ If we are sad, then if we start singing a song, a nice, good, and happy song, our mood improves.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'if we started' should be 'if we start' for present conditional; 'a nice good and happy moment to one song' is unclear and should be 'a nice, good, and happy song'; 'our mood get out done' is incorrect and should be 'our mood improves'.

× For that reason, I think that singing can bring happiness to the people.

✓ For that reason, I think that singing can bring happiness to people.

The definite article 'the' before 'people' is unnecessary here; 'people' in general does not require 'the'.