唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“reduce my suggest”应为“reduce my stress”。建议你在回答时注意语法的正确性，并使用更准确的词汇表达你的意思，同时保持句子简洁自然。

示例: I like singing because it helps me reduce stress and broaden my horizons, especially when I learn English songs. Moreover, singing helps me relax and feel calm.

建议: 回答中表达了拒绝学习唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

示例: No, I haven't learned how to sing, although my guitar teacher tried to teach me. However, I refused because I find singing quite difficult and I don't think I'm good at it.

建议: 回答中有很多语法错误和表达不清晰的地方，例如“divulged a sum of money”应为“spent a sum of money”。建议你简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇，并确保表达清楚。

示例: I want to sing for my mom because she spent a lot of money to help me learn how to play the guitar. I want to show her that her investment was worthwhile.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“sing, sing, sing”。建议你使用更准确的词汇表达感受，并避免重复，同时注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because the lyrics are encouraging and touching. When I sing, I feel healed and can lose myself in the music.

× I like singing because singing help me to reduce my suggest and I always expand my horizon especially when I learn English tunes and I also think singing is help me to become be and help me to calm down.

✓ I like singing because singing helps me to reduce my stress and I always expand my horizon especially when I learn English tunes and I also think singing helps me to become better and helps me to calm down.

动词help在这里主语是单数的singing，动词需要加-s，变成helps。suggest应为stress，意思是压力。become后面缺少形容词better。动词help后面缺少第三人称单数形式。

× No, I haven't, but my guitar teacher used to tell me how to sing but I really refuse it because I think it is really difficult for me.

✓ No, I haven't, but my guitar teacher used to tell me how to sing but I really refused it because I think it is really difficult for me.

refuse是过去发生的动作，应该用过去式refused。

× Actually I have seen for my mom because my mom divulged a sum of money to to help me to learn how to play guitar and so I have to play it for her but and so he will not think it's a waste of money.

✓ Actually I have sung for my mom because my mom spent a sum of money to help me to learn how to play guitar and so I have to play it for her so she will not think it's a waste of money.

have seen用错，应该用have sung表示唱歌。divulged用错，应该用spent表示花费。he用错，指代应为she。

× Actually I have seen for my mom because my mom divulged a sum of money to to help me to learn how to play guitar and so I have to play it for her but and so he will not think it's a waste of money.

✓ Actually I have sung for my mom because my mom spent a sum of money to help me to learn how to play guitar and so I have to play it for her so she will not think it's a waste of money.

he指代错误，应该用she指代mom。

× Yes, I think because the lyric is quite supportive to everyone and it is also moving. And when I sing, sing, sing when I was singing I can got a sense of treatment and I also lose myself in my own sound.

✓ Yes, I think because the lyrics are quite supportive to everyone and it is also moving. And when I sing, sing, sing, when I am singing I can get a sense of treatment and I also lose myself in my own sound.

lyric应为复数形式lyrics。can got错误，应为can get。时态应保持一致，使用现在进行时am singing。