唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议减少口头语，注意发音和语法，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I am tired or stressed. Moreover, singing can connect people from different backgrounds and cultures.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子，明确表达时间和原因，避免模糊和重复。

示例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. However, I stopped learning because I didn't have enough time, but I still love singing.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简洁明了地表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，避免含糊和错误。

示例: I want to sing for my mom and my friends because they always support me, even though I am not very good at singing.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不清。建议使用准确的词汇描述唱歌带来的快乐，并用连贯的句子表达观点。

示例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because music has different melodies that can express various emotions. It suits people of all ages and backgrounds.

× I think it is a it is a good way for me to, umm, relax my mind when I feel tired and under a heavy press.

✓ I think it is a good way for me to relax my mind when I feel tired and under heavy pressure.

句子中重复了“it is a”，且“under a heavy press”表达不准确，应为“under heavy pressure”。建议去掉重复部分，使用正确的短语。

× On the other hand, I think seeing can build a bridge for different people.

✓ On the other hand, I think singing can build a bridge between different people.

原句中“seeing”应为“singing”，且“build a bridge for different people”表达不准确，正确用法是“build a bridge between different people”。

× Yes, I can still remember that I learned thinking when I was in my primary school, but after primary school I think I have.

✓ Yes, I can still remember that I learned singing when I was in primary school, but after primary school I think I haven't.

原句中“learned thinking”应为“learned singing”，且“I think I have”表达不完整，应为“I think I haven't”。

× I don't have enough time to learn it so I give up, but I love it.

✓ I don't have enough time to learn it so I gave up, but I love it.

句子描述的是过去放弃学习，动词时态应为过去式“gave up”，而非现在时“give up”。

× I think maybe my mom and my friends, I think I'm not good at it so maybe I will make some stuff but they will give me support to singing and don't think it is awful.

✓ I think maybe my mom and my friends. I think I'm not good at it so maybe I will make some mistakes but they will support me in singing and not think it is awful.

原句中“make some stuff”用词错误，应为“make some mistakes”；“give me support to singing”应改为“support me in singing”；句子结构混乱，建议分句表达。

× I think it's a good way for people to make a feel happy because it has some melody, so it has different melodies such as fight, interesting and still on.

✓ I think it's a good way for people to feel happy because it has melodies, such as lively, interesting, and soothing ones.

“make a feel happy”表达错误，应为“feel happy”；“some melody”应为复数“melodies”；“fight, interesting and still on”词汇使用不当，改为“lively, interesting, and soothing”。

× It is suit for different peoples.

✓ It is suitable for different people.

“suit”应为形容词“suitable”；“peoples”错误，正确用法是“people”，表示复数的人。