唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'I like singing' multiple times, state it once and then explain why you feel shy or prefer listening to music.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing, but I often feel shy singing in front of others because I'm not confident in my abilities. Therefore, I usually prefer listening to music rather than singing myself.

建议: Focus on using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Avoid filler words and try to answer directly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details. For example, clarify that you have never taken singing lessons and explain why.

示例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I lack confidence in my singing abilities. I don't plan to learn in the future either.

建议: Try to organize your answer more clearly by starting with a direct response, then adding specific reasons using linking words. Also, improve vocabulary by replacing informal phrases with more natural expressions.

示例: I prefer to sing for my friends because I feel more confident around them. They are very supportive and encourage me even though I'm not a great singer, which motivates me to keep singing.

建议: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structures. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Avoid vague phrases like 'like in something'.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Although some may feel shy about singing in front of others, singing alone can help them relax and relieve stress.

× I didn't took a a chance to learn singing.

✓ I didn't take a chance to learn singing.

The auxiliary 'did' is already in the past tense, so the main verb should be in its base form 'take' instead of the past tense 'took'. Using 'took' after 'did' is incorrect.

× I have to sing, uh, in the front of other people.

✓ I have to sing, uh, in front of other people.

The correct prepositional phrase is 'in front of' without the article 'the'. Using 'in the front of' is incorrect in this context.

× I prefer to, uh, listen music rather than doing singing.

✓ I prefer to, uh, listen to music rather than sing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by a noun. Also, 'doing singing' is awkward; 'sing' is the correct verb form here.

× I'm not feeling confident about my singing abilities. So I would not prefer and future as well to learn singing and never in the past.

✓ I'm not confident about my singing abilities. So I would not prefer to learn singing in the future, nor have I in the past.

The phrase 'would not prefer and future as well' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'would not prefer to learn singing in the future'. Also, 'never in the past' should be connected properly to the sentence. 'I'm not feeling confident' is better as 'I'm not confident' for present state.

× They are supporting me as I'm not a good singer, but they are still listening to me and always putting to me, sharing me that I'm doing good and great job.

✓ They support me even though I'm not a good singer, but they still listen to me and always tell me that I'm doing a good and great job.

The phrase 'putting to me, sharing me' is incorrect. The correct verbs are 'tell me' or 'encourage me'. Also, 'doing good' should be 'doing a good job'.

× They always prefer to listening music rather than singing because it helped them to relax and leaving their stress.

✓ They always prefer listening to music rather than singing because it helps them to relax and relieve their stress.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund without 'to' (i.e., 'prefer listening'). Also, 'listening music' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Leaving their stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve their stress'.