唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek bar repeat kora hoyeche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe structure korte, ar ekoi kotha bar bar na bolte. Apnar answer ke aro natural korte, chesta korun kichu linking words use korte, jemon 'because', 'so', 'and'.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it refreshes and relaxes my mind. Whenever I feel happy or sad, I listen to music to improve my mood.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu confusion ache ar grammar mistake o ache. Apni chesta korun clear ar shothik sentence structure use korte. Apnar answer ke logical bhabe present korte linking words use korun. Ar sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe complete korun.

示例: Actually, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I often listen to music. That's why I love singing, even though I haven't had any training.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu apni aro specific hote paren. Apni chesta korun kichu linking words use korte jate answer ta aro fluent lage. Ar kichu specific details add korte paren.

示例: Normally, I sing for myself. I don't usually sing in public or in front of others. I prefer to sit in my room, relax, and sing songs to refresh my mind.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu sentence incomplete ar grammar mistake ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke complete korte ar linking words use korte jate answer ta natural lage. Apni aro specific example dite paren.

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it improves our mood and refreshes our mind. For example, when I sing, I feel more relaxed and joyful.

× Yes, I like singing because it refresh my mind and also relax my mind whenever I feel happy or whenever I feel sad I listen to music to refresh my mind.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it refreshes my mind and also relaxes my mind whenever I feel happy or whenever I feel sad I listen to music to refresh my mind.

The verbs 'refresh' and 'relax' need to be in the third person singular present tense form 'refreshes' and 'relaxes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a common subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× We basically know I never learn how to sing, but we often listen music, so that's why we love to sing like them.

✓ We basically know I never learned how to sing, but we often listen to music, so that's why we love to sing like them.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to indicate a completed action in the past. Also, the phrase 'listen music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to music' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object.

× We basically know I never learn how to sing, but we often listen music, so that's why we love to sing like them.

✓ We basically know I never learned how to sing, but we often listen to music, so that's why we love to sing like them.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. So, 'listen music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to music'.

× So yeah, that's why I love singing, but not really. I learned it.

✓ So yeah, that's why I love singing, but not really. I haven't learned it.

The phrase 'I learned it' suggests a completed action, but the context implies the student has not learned how to sing. Using the present perfect negative 'haven't learned' correctly expresses this ongoing state.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

In formal English, 'whom' is the correct object form of 'who' when referring to the object of a preposition like 'for'. However, in spoken English, 'who' is commonly used.

× Normally I think for myself.

✓ Normally, I think about myself.

The verb 'think' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to considering oneself. 'Think for myself' means to make one's own decisions, which is a different meaning.

× I never think in public place or in front of anyone normally.

✓ I never think in a public place or in front of anyone normally.

The phrase 'public place' requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'think in public place' is awkward; it would be better to say 'sing in a public place' if referring to singing.

× I normally sit in my room, relax and sing a song to refresh my mind.

✓ I normally sit in my room, relax, and sing a song to refresh my mind.

In a list of actions, commas should separate the items, and a comma before 'and' (Oxford comma) improves clarity.

× Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because. It will enlighten our mood whenever we sing.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it will enlighten our mood whenever we sing.

The sentence fragment 'because.' should be connected to the following sentence to form a complete sentence. Also, 'enlighten our mood' is unusual; 'brighten' or 'improve' mood would be better, but this is not a grammar error.

× It's refreshing our mind so.

✓ It refreshes our mind, so.

The phrase 'It's refreshing' is present continuous, which is incorrect here. The simple present 'It refreshes' is appropriate to express a general truth or habitual action.