唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免重复表达。可以用更简洁自然的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

示例: Yes, I like singing because I have dreamed of becoming a singer since I was a child. Singing makes me happy and helps me relax. Sometimes, it also allows me to express my feelings.

建议: 回答中表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意单词拼写和语法准确。可以具体说明学习其他事情的原因。

示例: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I have been busy learning other skills, such as playing the guzheng and improving my handwriting. However, I think I might have some natural talent for singing.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，建议先直接回答问题，再用具体理由支持。注意代词使用和句子完整性。

示例: I find it hard to say, but if I had to choose, I would like to sing for my parents because they always show love and support to me.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法错误严重，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点并用具体理由支持。

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel joyful. Singing is also a good way to relieve stress.

× Yes, I really like because when I was a child I'm dreaming of to be a singer and also I think seeing can make me happy and I can make me relax and also sometimes it can shows my issues, my feeling.

✓ Yes, I really like it because when I was a child I dreamed of being a singer and also I think singing can make me happy and help me relax and sometimes it can show my issues, my feelings.

动词后面接动名词时，dream后应接动名词形式being，而不是不定式to be。seeing应为singing，且动词show后主语是单数时动词用单数形式show。句中make me relax应改为help me relax或make me relaxed。

× Yes, I really like because when I was a child I'm dreaming of to be a singer and also I think seeing can make me happy and I can make me relax and also sometimes it can shows my issues, my feeling.

✓ Yes, I really like it because when I was a child I dreamed of being a singer and also I think singing can make me happy and help me relax and sometimes it can show my issues, my feelings.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去式，dream的过去式是dreamed。

× No, I haven't because I have no time to learn singing these days because I learned many other things, for example Gujan and handwriting.

✓ No, I haven't because I have no time to learn singing these days as I have learned many other things, for example Guqin and handwriting.

learn后接动名词singing是正确的，但learned应与现在完成时态保持一致，改为have learned更合适。

× No, I haven't because I have no time to learn singing these days because I learned many other things, for example Gujan and handwriting.

✓ No, I haven't because I have no time to learn singing these days as I have learned many other things, for example Guqin and handwriting.

描述最近的情况时，使用现在完成时态更合适，learned改为have learned。

× It's hardly to say this because when I was singing I just feel relaxed and I feel very happy.

✓ It's hard to say this because when I am singing I just feel relaxed and very happy.

hardly是副词，表示“几乎不”，此处应使用形容词hard。

× But As for who I want to sing for, I think maybe it's my parents because she always shows love for us, for me and I think I also.

✓ But as for who I want to sing for, I think maybe it's my parents because they always show love for us, for me, and I think so too.

parents是复数，代词应使用they而非she。

× Yes I do because I singing you, you are singing with this because you are really happy and you want to show your feelings to others people.

✓ Yes, I do because when I am singing, you are singing with me because you are really happy and want to show your feelings to other people.

动词后应使用动名词或现在分词形式，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× Yes I do because I singing you, you are singing with this because you are really happy and you want to show your feelings to others people.

✓ Yes, I do because when I am singing, you are singing with me because you are really happy and want to show your feelings to other people.

介词with后应接人称代词me，而非this；others people应为other people。

× And also I think seeing also is a way to release release.

✓ And also I think singing is a way to release stress.

seeing应为singing，且release后应接名词stress表示释放压力。