唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构有些复杂且部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and forget my stress. However, I am not confident in my singing skills, so I usually sing only when I am alone. If I want to perform in public, I think I need some training first.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“a very fascinating skills”。建议注意单复数一致，使用更自然的表达，并且句子结构更清晰。

示例: Actually, I only learned singing during primary school. Since then, I haven't had any formal training. But I find singing very interesting and hope to learn more if I have time and money in the future.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“the person that I want to see for the most”。建议使用更准确的表达，注意时态和句子连贯性。

示例: I mainly want to sing for myself because singing helps me express my feelings and relieve stress. I don't usually sing for others.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词错误，如“secrets”应为“secretes”，“Seroquel”是药物名称，可能是误用。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，并简化表达。

示例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy. Scientifically, singing releases hormones like dopamine that help improve our mood and reduce stress.

× But I also am aware that I don't think very well, so I won't sing them properly or in front of my friends.

✓ But I also am aware that I don't sing very well, so I won't sing properly or in front of my friends.

这里的“think”应为“sing”，且“them”指代不明确，应去掉。动词与主语不匹配，导致句意不清。建议使用正确的动词和去除多余代词。

× But I regard singing as a very fascinating skills and I'm really looking forward to it if I have spare time and money in the future.

✓ But I regard singing as a very fascinating skill and I'm really looking forward to it if I have spare time and money in the future.

“skills”应为单数“skill”，因为singing作为一个整体技能被看待。复数形式不符合语境。

× Well, actually the person that I want to see for the most is for myself because I regarded singing as a process of expressing myself and release emotional stress.

✓ Well, actually the person that I want to see the most is myself because I regard singing as a process of expressing myself and releasing emotional stress.

“regarded”应使用现在时“regard”，因为表达的是当前观点；“release”应改为动名词“releasing”，与“expressing”保持一致。

× So I think singing is mainly for myself, not or any other human beings.

✓ So I think singing is mainly for myself, not for any other human beings.

缺少介词“for”，导致句子结构不完整。

× When we sings, our brain secrets hormones like dopamine and Seroquel to help us to stabilize our emotions and promote happiness.

✓ When we sing, our brain secretes hormones like dopamine and serotonin to help us stabilize our emotions and promote happiness.

“sings”应为“sing”，主语为复数“we”；“secrets”应为“secretes”，动词拼写错误；“Seroquel”应为“serotonin”，正确的生物学术语；“help us to stabilize”中“to”可省略，更自然。