唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“seeing”应为“singing”，“stress despair”表达不清晰。建议使用简单正确的句子表达原因，并避免重复和不连贯。

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me reduce stress. Whenever I feel tired, I sing to relax and feel better.

建议: 回答中多次错误使用“seeing”代替“singing”，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明学习情况，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

示例: Yes, I am currently learning to sing by watching online videos. I haven't taken formal lessons because I feel a bit shy.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，且“seeing”应为“singing”。建议用完整句子表达自己唱歌的目的，并说明原因。

示例: I want to sing for myself because it gives me strength and makes me feel relaxed and happy.

建议: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

示例: Yes, I think singing can easily change people's emotions. Happiness from singing can help people feel less sad.

× I like singing because seeing is a good reduced stress method for me.

✓ I like singing because singing is a good stress-reducing method for me.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且'reduced stress'应改为'stress-reducing'，因为'reduced'是过去分词，不能直接修饰名词，应该用现在分词形式构成形容词短语。

× When I guess when I feel very tired I will sing and my stress despair.

✓ When I feel very tired, I will sing and my stress disappears.

句中'guess'无意义，应删除；'despair'用作名词时意为绝望，动词形式不合适，应该用'disappear'表示消失。

× Uh, I'm just learning, learning seeing on the Internet.

✓ Uh, I'm just learning, learning singing on the Internet.

'seeing'应为'singing'，且时态正确，表示正在学习唱歌。

× I never learn seeing these people because it's make me very awkward.

✓ I never learn singing from these people because it makes me very awkward.

'learn'后应接动词不定式或动名词，'seeing'应为'singing'；'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，因为主语是it。

× I'm just want to sing for me because a thing can give me power and it's make me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ I just want to sing for myself because it can give me power and it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

'I'm just want'应为'I just want'，'for me'应为'for myself'表示为自己唱；'it's make'应为'it makes'，主谓一致。

× I think seeing is is good for.

✓ I think singing is good for me.

'seeing'应为'singing'；句尾缺少宾语，补充'me'使句子完整。

× Yes, I think seeing is can easy to change people emotion and a happy a happiness thing can change people sad.

✓ Yes, I think singing can easily change people's emotions, and a happy thing can change people's sadness.

'seeing'应为'singing'；'is can'语法错误，去掉'is'；'easy'应为副词'easily'；'people emotion'应为复数'people's emotions'；'a happy a happiness thing'重复，应简化为'a happy thing'；'people sad'应为'people's sadness'。