唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say 'I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and comfortable.' Also, keep your answer concise and avoid unclear phrases like 'whatever' and 'I feel I already same to same try to sing.'

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and comfortable. When I listen to songs, I enjoy trying to sing along because it makes me happy.

建议: Improve your sentence structure and clarity. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say 'No, I have never learned to sing because my parents did not allow me. In my culture, singing is not very common, but I would like to try it in the future.'

示例: No, I have never learned to sing because my parents did not allow me. In my culture, singing is not very common, but I hope to try it in the future.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. For example, say 'I prefer to sing just for myself because I enjoy it personally. I don't like singing in front of others, but I love music and instruments.'

示例: I prefer to sing just for myself because I enjoy it personally. I don't like singing in front of others, but I love music and playing instruments.

建议: Provide a clear opinion and use linking words to explain your ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it depends on their mood. When people feel happy, they like to sing, but when they are sad, they may not want to sing.'

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it depends on their mood. When people feel happy, they like to sing, but when they are sad, they may not want to sing.

× Absolutely, I like singing because when I sing the song I feel relaxed, comfort, whatever when I listen the song so I feel I already same to same try to sing.

✓ Absolutely, I like singing because when I sing the song I feel relaxed and comfortable, whatever when I listen to the song so I feel I already try to sing the same way.

The word 'comfort' is incorrectly used; it should be the adjective 'comfortable' to describe a feeling. Also, 'listen the song' is missing the preposition 'to'. The phrase 'I already same to same try to sing' is unclear and corrected to 'I already try to sing the same way' for clarity and correctness.

× Absolutely, I like singing because when I sing the song I feel relaxed, comfort, whatever when I listen the song so I feel I already same to same try to sing.

✓ Absolutely, I like singing because when I sing the song I feel relaxed and comfortable, whatever when I listen to the song so I feel I already try to sing the same way.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object, so 'listen the song' should be 'listen to the song'.

× No, I have not ever learned to sing because my parents have not permission to.

✓ No, I have never learned to sing because my parents have not given permission.

The phrase 'have not permission to' is incorrect; it should be 'have not given permission' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'have not ever learned' is better expressed as 'have never learned' for naturalness.

× Me in my culture don't like to sing the song but I like when I try in my future try.

✓ In my culture, we don't like to sing songs, but I would like to try singing in the future.

The pronoun 'Me' is incorrectly used as the subject; it should be 'I' or rephrased. Also, 'don't' should agree with the plural subject 'we'. The phrase 'I like when I try in my future try' is unclear and corrected for clarity.

× No, I'm not want to sing for just for me, because I don't like sing the song all over the world, whatever, but in I suggest I sing the song just because of me, because I love singing and you know that instrument is his difference.

✓ No, I don't want to sing for anyone, just for myself, because I don't like singing songs all over the world. However, I suggest I sing just for myself because I love singing, and you know that the instrument makes a difference.

The phrase 'I'm not want to' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't want to'. Also, 'I don't like sing' should be 'I don't like singing'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I'm not want to sing for just for me, because I don't like sing the song all over the world, whatever, but in I suggest I sing the song just because of me, because I love singing and you know that instrument is his difference.

✓ No, I don't want to sing for anyone, just for myself, because I don't like singing songs all over the world. However, I suggest I sing just for myself because I love singing, and you know that the instrument makes a difference.

The pronouns 'me' and 'his' are incorrectly used. 'Just for me' is better expressed as 'just for myself' to indicate personal action. 'His difference' is unclear and corrected to 'makes a difference'.

× Hmm, maybe yes, maybe no, because it depends on your, because it depends on people's mood.

✓ Hmm, maybe yes, maybe no, because it depends on you, and on people's moods.

The phrase 'depends on your' is incomplete and should be 'depends on you'. Also, 'people's mood' should be plural 'people's moods' to indicate variation among individuals.

× Because sometimes people are very sad so don't like to sing the song.

✓ Because sometimes people are very sad, so they don't like to sing songs.

The phrase 'sing the song' is too specific; 'sing songs' is more general and appropriate. Also, the subject 'people' requires the plural verb and pronoun 'they'.

× But maybe some people mood is very good, so people like it.

✓ But maybe some people's moods are very good, so people like it.

The phrase 'some people mood' should be possessive plural 'some people's moods'. Also, 'mood is' should be plural 'moods are' to agree with 'people'.

× Peoples are like sing the song.

✓ People like singing songs.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the correct plural is 'people'. Also, 'are like sing' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing'. 'The song' is too specific; 'songs' is more general.