唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və mənasız ifadələr var. Daha təbii və aydın ifadələr istifadə edin, məsələn, duyğularınızı və səbəblərinizi sadə və düzgün cümlələrlə ifadə edin.

示例: Yes, I like singing, especially when I have free time. It makes me feel very happy and relaxed.

建议: Cümlələriniz qısa və əlaqəsizdir. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün əlavə məlumat verin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

示例: I have never formally learned how to sing, but I often listen to music and try to imitate the singers to improve my skills.

建议: Cümlələriniz qarışıq və mənasızdır. Cavabınızı daha sadə və aydın ifadə edin, fikrinizi düzgün və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə edin.

示例: I would like to sing for my partner because he enjoys my singing and it makes him happy.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və mənasız ifadələr var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün düzgün ifadələr və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it motivates us and boosts our energy to do things.

× Also I doing choices.

✓ Also I am making choices.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' before the verb in the -ing form. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' plus the verb ending in -ing. Here, 'doing' needs 'am' to form 'I am doing'. However, 'doing choices' is not idiomatic; 'making choices' is more appropriate.

× It felt me.

✓ It made me feel happy.

The phrase 'It felt me' is incorrect because 'feel' is not used with a direct object in this way. Instead, 'make someone feel' is the correct structure to express causing an emotion.

× It makes me felt over the moon.

✓ It makes me feel over the moon.

The verb 'makes' should be followed by the base form 'feel', not the past tense 'felt'. After causative verbs like 'make', the base form of the verb is used.

× I have never learned how to sing.

✓ I have never learnt how to sing.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are past participles of 'learn'. 'Learnt' is more common in British English, but 'learned' is acceptable in American English. Since the rest of the transcript uses British English spelling (e.g., 'learnt'), consistency suggests using 'learnt'.

× Sometimes I think for my lover because he said that I have a victim, but I don't think actually I think for him.

✓ Sometimes I think about my lover because he said that I am a victim, but actually, I don't think so; I think about him.

The verb 'think' is usually followed by 'about' when referring to considering someone or something. Also, 'have a victim' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I am a victim'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification.

× Actually yes, I think that singing can break happiness to people because when we thinking we have a motorway we motivates us also boost our energy to to doing something.

✓ Actually, yes, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because when we think we have a motivation, it motivates us and also boosts our energy to do something.

The phrase 'break happiness to people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring happiness to people'. 'Thinking' should be 'think' to match the present tense. 'Motivates' should agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'To to doing' is incorrect; it should be 'to do'. Also, 'motorway' is incorrect in this context; 'motivation' is the intended word.