唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, instead of saying "I find it a fun and expressing myself," you could say "I find it fun and a good way to express myself." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing, although I don't consider myself a very good singer. However, I often sing while working or cooking because it makes these tasks more enjoyable and helps me express myself.

建议: Your answer repeats similar ideas and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to be more concise and use correct tense forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say "No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I practice by listening to songs and singing along casually."

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I usually practice singing by listening to songs and singing along casually, which helps me improve gradually.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct verb tenses. Also, avoid confusing phrases like "I had never saw any song for others I sing." You can say, "I usually sing for myself and rarely perform for others. Sometimes, I participate in singing games for fun."

示例: I usually sing for myself and rarely perform for others. Sometimes, I enjoy participating in singing games, which are fun and entertaining.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. For example, instead of "one of the activity which makes you relax," say "an activity that helps people relax." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is an activity that helps them relax and enjoy their tasks. Moreover, singing can improve concentration and calm the mind.

× Even though I'm not a professional singer, I find it a fun and expressing myself.

✓ Even though I'm not a professional singer, I find it fun and a way to express myself.

The phrase 'a fun and expressing myself' is incorrect because 'expressing' is a verb in the -ing form used improperly here. Instead, 'a way to express myself' correctly uses the infinitive form to indicate purpose or function.

× No, I haven't joined.

✓ No, I haven't joined any singing classes.

The sentence 'No, I haven't joined.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'any singing classes' clarifies the object of 'joined' and fits the present perfect tense usage.

× I haven't learnt formally how to sing, although I had never joined any singing classes.

✓ I haven't learnt formally how to sing, and I have never joined any singing classes.

Mixing present perfect ('haven't learnt') with past perfect ('had never joined') is inconsistent. Using present perfect ('have never joined') maintains tense consistency and clarity.

× But I mostly practice singing by listening whenever I got to listen any song.

✓ But I mostly practice singing by listening whenever I get to listen to any song.

The phrase 'whenever I got to listen' incorrectly uses past tense 'got' instead of present tense 'get' to match the habitual action. Also, 'listen any song' requires the preposition 'to' as in 'listen to any song'.

× whenever I got to listen any song.

✓ whenever I get to listen to any song.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Omitting 'to' is a common error; correct usage is 'listen to any song'.

× I had never saw any song for others I sing.

✓ I have never sung any song for others.

The phrase 'had never saw' is incorrect; 'saw' is simple past, but the present perfect 'have never sung' is appropriate here. Also, 'any song for others I sing' is awkward; rephrased to 'any song for others' for clarity.

× Sometimes I prefer to sing in some games like which is a games of songs.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to sing in some games, like games of songs.

The phrase 'like which is a games of songs' is ungrammatical and unclear. Simplifying to 'like games of songs' corrects the structure and maintains meaning.

× I had never sung it for any other one.

✓ I have never sung it for anyone else.

Using past perfect 'had never sung' is incorrect here; present perfect 'have never sung' fits better. Also, 'any other one' is awkward; 'anyone else' is the correct pronoun.

× Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people as it is one of the activity which makes you relax and it also helps you to enjoy a task while you are singing.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people as it is one of the activities which make you relax and also help you enjoy a task while you are singing.

The phrase 'one of the activity' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the activities' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'which makes' should be 'which make' to agree with plural 'activities'. Similarly, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject.