唱歌— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
That's just a question for me. Matter of fact, singing was my hobby since I was a little kid. As long as I can remember, I've been vocalizing whenever I felt felt down, whenever I felt happy. My way to express my emotions and feelings was by vocalizing.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
I personally think that I had a gift of singing and vocalizing, but I have not taken lessons. I wish I would take lessons because it would enhance my ability to vocalize in my singing skills so I would be very happy.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I've been a very shy person. I have not sang for anyone. Maybe when I was a little kid I used to sing for my family, but hopefully in the future I will gather the courage up to sing for my family, my friends, to in front of people that I don't know, maybe strangers. I really do wish vocalizing would be my career.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Absolutely. Not only that, but I do believe that whenever people hear singing or whenever people sing, they it's a way of expressing their emotions. Whether it's happiness, sadness, anger, grief, you can really express and connect your emotions with thinking.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer is heartfelt but a bit repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to avoid repeating words like 'felt' and use more natural expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words.
示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it has been my hobby since childhood. Whenever I feel happy or sad, I express my emotions through singing, which helps me feel better.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar words like 'vocalize' and 'singing skills' closely. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
示例: I believe I have a natural talent for singing, but I have never taken formal lessons. However, I would like to take classes in the future to improve my skills and become a better singer.
Who do you want to sing for?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer is honest but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to organize your ideas with linking words and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct verb forms like 'sung' instead of 'sang' in this context.
示例: I am quite shy, so I haven't sung for many people. When I was a child, I sang for my family, and I hope to gain confidence to perform for friends and even strangers in the future. Ultimately, I wish to pursue singing as a career.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer shows good understanding but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'connect your emotions with thinking.' Try to use clearer expressions and linking words to make your answer more coherent.
示例: Absolutely. I believe singing allows people to express a wide range of emotions, such as happiness, sadness, or anger. It helps them connect with their feelings and share them with others.
语法
× singing was my hobby since I was a little kid
✓ singing has been my hobby since I was a little kid
The phrase 'since I was a little kid' requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Using simple past 'was' incorrectly suggests the hobby ended in the past.
× I've been vocalizing whenever I felt felt down, whenever I felt happy
✓ I've been vocalizing whenever I felt down, whenever I felt happy
The repetition of the word 'felt' is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.
× I have not sang for anyone
✓ I have not sung for anyone
After 'have not', the past participle form of the verb should be used. 'Sang' is simple past, while 'sung' is the correct past participle.
× I really do wish vocalizing would be my career
✓ I really do wish vocalizing to be my career
The verb 'wish' is usually followed by a clause or infinitive. However, 'wish vocalizing would be my career' is awkward; better phrasing would be 'I really do wish to have a career in vocalizing' or 'I really do wish vocalizing were my career.' The original sentence is awkward in structure.
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